his chest pops out too mutch and his ss hair should have less saturation cuz it makes it look dull ss are more anger and that makes there colors more vivid(probly made a bunch of spelling error but you get the gist of it?)

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Bobinashoe wrote : His hair looks very odd, His SSJ\SSJ2 hair isn't the right color, SSJ2 needs a lot of improvement, The arms look very deformed, His chest muscles are scary, Why a black outfit?, His knees are thick, The eye doesn't really look like Vegetas, and overall i'm not liking this sprite at all.. Sorry. Not even gonna rate. If I were to do so, people would spam the thread with 'AMG U HATE RELLY GUD LUKIN SPRITEZ LULZ NUB!!11' as usual.

His SSJ hair isn't the "Right" Color Because the "Right" colors look horrible on this sprite.

Also SSj2 every Pixel below the hair is the same. Not sure how you see the arms being deformed. they look perfectly fine to me and anyone else who's criticized this.

I agree with the chest muscle statemnt though on the sprite with his shirt on I need to fix that up.

Also I used a black outfit because black is cooler than blue and it can make my sprite what ever color I want :P

He doesn't really have knees.

But you don't have to like it if you don't want to but try and give some better criticism so they don't seem unnecessarily aggressive. If people are saying things like you stated it's because your criticisms aren't that helpful.

Just suggest ways you I can improve it don't tell me what you don't like and then not back it up with some helpful things.

Lol. The reason why I didn't give any criticism was because everyone else on here likes it.

No point in giving criticism to a sprite that everyone loves besides 1-2 people.

And, if you were to actually look around the forum, i'm not a half bad critic. I just didn't want to waste my time typing out a very long criticism filled post that everyone would be against, considering that its a matter of personal taste.  

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I know your a good crit man I wish you would tell me how i could improve this in detail.

Okay then, but i'm blaming you if I get flamed. XD

First, the arm muscles. They seem to be tiny on his arm. It seems as though you tried to fit in way too much detail into such a small arm. I'd try toning it down a notch so everything doesn't seem so cluttered.


If you look here at his arm muscles, there less detailed but still give off a perfect impression of muscles. I'd try either fashioning it after the muscles in that picture, or at least toning down the detail on the muscle so everything isn't bunched together.

The hair. Vegetas hair isn't all like that. It seems way too shiny and somewhat too 'sleek' to be Vegetas hair.



Take a look at the picture I just shown and then take a look at your sprite. I know you're trying to be original with a new 'flare' added to the Vegeta, but it's a bit much. His widdows peak is very small, try lengthening it more. All of the spikes need to be fashioned more after a reference picture of Vegeta or something because they are all a little to 'curved' or 'stiff' in a sense, somewhat hard to explain.



The SSJ Hair needs to be somewhat more of that color in the picture. Because right now its really off, just seems weird you colored it otherwise.

The SSJ1 seems fine other then that, just try adding at least one or two more spikes to it to make it seem more like SSJ, and less 'curvy'.


The SSJ2 hair is somewhat off.
Try making it less straight up and slightly more diagonal. Make the strands less fat and more pointy, also try and make the hair more continious (You know what I mean, lol)

The chest.. I'm just not too sure about. Try looking at a broly picture, or better yet, an actual picture of Vegeta without a shirt (Which, I can't find at the moment)
and use that as a reference.

The eye should be more diagonal, not so straight then all of a sudden a "Drop". Look at the above pictures to see what I mean.

There yah go.  

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Thats Helpful M8 don't know why people would flam you for that unless they just can't take good Criticism.

While you were probably typing that I made a few improvements. still working.

Ohhh hho hooo my godddd =[[[[

everytime you make an awesome sprite and stil you make it more awesome 10/10.

The yellow SSJ hair doesn't suit the style of the rest of the sprite, I prefer the duller more real looking one. Please sheet this

very good, but I dislike the ssj hair

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lol

It looks better yellow. Because the other one doesnt even look like SSJ. 10/10