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 NS-Kage
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 NS-Kage
  Posted 16/09/2007 08:37:35 PM
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here is the ug vegeta, if you have critiscisme like the hair is bad then tell me what I can do to fix it cuz i want it to be perfect, and if you want to edit it yourself first ask me, so C&C and rate */10
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/8329/ugvegmr1.png

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 -Nero-
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  Posted 16/09/2007 08:53:39 PM
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I like it the only hair i dont like is the normal form so try make it slightly taller and itll be fine!!

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 Blues Light
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 Blues Light
  Posted 17/09/2007 01:17:36 AM
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The hair's not really thick enough for Z-Vegeta. This looks like a half-way point from his Z to his GT hair (which would be awesome), but right now it just looks too small.
His knees look a little too pointed, but just a little.

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 Bobinashoe
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 Super Saiyan 2
  Posted 17/09/2007 01:36:13 AM
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What the..

I know you were trying to be more original with the hair, but that's just ridiculous. You can't honestly say that if you looked at a picture of Vegeta's hair and then compared it to your sprite, it looks like it. O_O

I can only tell very minor differences between the SSJ and the SSJ2. Try making them vary more and looking more like Vegeta's SSJ forms.

The arm is short and has weird muscles, try and fix that by lengthening out his arm.

The legs are rather odd, no idea how you can fix em with your style.

Everything else is fine; if lackluster..


4/10.

Needs some improvement badly.


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 JoetheDevil
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 JoetheDevil
  Posted 17/09/2007 01:40:26 AM
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hairs not good
and the base is from entantillo believe it or not
muscles are bad on the arm
ps and if you say the base is from smartguy then hes seriously a stealer

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 Sasuke-ish
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 Sasuke-ish
  Posted 17/09/2007 01:44:46 AM
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1. Make the Torso Wider or legs thinner.
2. Fix up the hair.
3. Fix the head big time looks a misshapen.
4. The shading is ugly try some different styles of shading.
5. The left arm looks horrible there are just some lines one it doesn't really look like muscles at all.
6. Also the hand needs to be modified a bit.
7. also the colors look kinda bad there needs to be some more contrast in the clothes shading.
8. Try a couple different Eyes aswell.

And thats about it.

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 NS-Kage
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 NS-Kage
  Posted 17/09/2007 04:33:36 AM
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ok thanks for the comments, I know it's bad and i'll try to fix the point's you said, and this is ug base so not from anone else.

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 JoetheDevil
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 JoetheDevil
  Posted 17/09/2007 08:04:26 PM
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it may be but entantillo made it srsly
the hand gives it away
i'd show you the sheet but i don't have it

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 NS-Kage
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 NS-Kage
  Posted 19/09/2007 06:09:53 PM
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hmm oke, but this isn't ug base anymore so well doesn't matter

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 Goraden
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 Goraden
  Posted 20/09/2007 00:06:13 AM
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All I have to say is the hair

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