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| Author : | Topic: Kid Gohan on Namek | Bottom |
| xinuj Posts : 1083 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
here is a wip sprited by me of Gohan when he went on Namek ![]() | |||
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| Blues Light moderator Posts : 2620 Majin |
-_- He also wears that outfit through the Namek and Ginyu sagas until Vegeta gives him and Kuririn their Saiyan armor. | |||
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| ::SoulReaper:: Posts : 1288 Super Saiyan 2 |
its ok, but looks abit weird anf out of proportion i cant put my finger on why | |||
| ::Nothing is more aweasome than Girls with Pudding:: |
| Ko Kurin Kobushi Posts : 889 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
Blues Light... shoosh, i new that really, i was just testing him ... yes, testing him, thats what i was doing ... | |||
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| ::SoulReaper:: Posts : 1288 Super Saiyan 2 |
my arse u were.... | |||
| ::Nothing is more aweasome than Girls with Pudding:: |
| Ko Kurin Kobushi Posts : 889 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
shoosh, im not with it today ... alright sorry goseb, its an awsome sprite 9/10 but his hair still needs to be more bowl-like | |||
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| ::SoulReaper:: Posts : 1288 Super Saiyan 2 |
and i believe chibi characters dont have mouths | |||
| ::Nothing is more aweasome than Girls with Pudding:: |
| Ko Kurin Kobushi Posts : 889 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
i dont use mouths on any of my characters, i think it gets in the way too much and i can achieve better shading without it | |||
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| ::SoulReaper:: Posts : 1288 Super Saiyan 2 |
same thing here, ko kurin kbbushi, i kinda hate lsw mouths | |||
| ::Nothing is more aweasome than Girls with Pudding:: |
| Ko Kurin Kobushi Posts : 889 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
yeah me too they look like massive black insect things crawling across the characters face! or from most peoples perspective a random black line | |||
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| Blues Light moderator Posts : 2620 Majin |
I like mouths, but back on topic... It's a fairly good sprite, but with a little tweaking it could be a great one. Gohan's little neck...cape...thing....covers too much of his shoulders. It should fit snuggly around his neck and his shoulders are bare. His bowl-cut doesn't have that large of a gap in it, but I like the way you're representing him. Also, the jury's still out on the black shading.....I personally don't like it, but it's really up to you. Finally, he's just a little too tall for Kid Son Gohan...he was a shrimp. Overall: 7/10. | |||
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| JoetheDevil moderator Posts : 5143 Super Saiyan 3 ![]() |
lsw mouths were on all lsw sprites in the beginning so the chibi characters were made with them tho you guys remove them becase well lswa did it | |||
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| xinuj Posts : 1083 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
here I edited him | |||
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| Blues Light moderator Posts : 2620 Majin |
Looking much better. Just keep fine tuning the details and it'll turn out a fine sprite. | |||
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