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 NS-Kage
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 NS-Kage
  Posted 10/10/2007 06:58:03 PM
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here's my gogeta.

http://i24.tinypic.com/28v9iev.png

http://i21.tinypic.com/34r9csm.png
Update^^

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--Last edited by NS-Kage on 2007-10-12 06:42:28 --

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 Kojin
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  Posted 10/10/2007 07:02:45 PM
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awsome 9/10 change the hand a litle  

--Last edited by Kojin on 2007-10-10 19:04:51 --

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 Blues Light
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 Blues Light
  Posted 10/10/2007 07:25:46 PM
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Looks really good
but:
His sash/belt shouldn't match the outline of his pants. It looks like his pants are half-blue instead of a belt.
His vest kinda cuts off too squarely with one line, instead of the puffy collar looking like it's on top The yellow collar should also be orange. His right boot looks odd. The blue over-covering looks like it's slipping down over his shoe.
Other than that, it's a really good sprite. These aren't huge things, but just what I noticed. 8.5/10.

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 NS-Kage
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 NS-Kage
  Posted 10/10/2007 07:30:39 PM
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I used the colors of the real gogeta, and well see it's yellow,Xd i'm fixing the other thins now, update will be up in 5 min

http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii222/NS-Kage/BaseSheet1shading.png
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 NS-Kage
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  Posted 10/10/2007 07:32:06 PM
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Srry for DP but updated
http://i24.tinypic.com/28v9iev.png

http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii222/NS-Kage/BaseSheet1shading.png
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 Blues Light
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  Posted 10/10/2007 07:34:27 PM
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MUCH much much better.

http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l165/hobbitkid37/BURUSU.jpg
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 NS-Kage
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 NS-Kage
  Posted 10/10/2007 07:39:03 PM
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what's the rating now..XD? and btw what ya think of the hair

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 Blues Light
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  Posted 10/10/2007 07:45:31 PM
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Rating....9/10.

I've not a Gogeta expert, but it looks like his hair to me. The shading is good, but I would remove the small black line in his back spike. It looks a bit unnecessary.

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 Glane
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 Glane
  Posted 10/10/2007 08:25:08 PM
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OMG its finally the perfect gogeta hair. HOLY GODNESS

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 NS-Kage
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 NS-Kage
  Posted 10/10/2007 08:41:16 PM
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WTF, you think it's the perfect hair..XD well much much thanks for that then..qxD

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 RageVX
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  Posted 10/10/2007 09:09:33 PM
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schweet dude =P

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 super_inferno
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 super_inferno
  Posted 10/10/2007 09:16:35 PM
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well i don't think the hair is perfect.
i think it sucks


just joking around the hair is awesome 8,5/10  

--Last edited by super_inferno on 2007-10-10 21:16:56 --

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 davisSS3david
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  Posted 10/10/2007 09:37:57 PM
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awesome i like the hair 9/10.

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 sinphos
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 sinphos
  Posted 11/10/2007 06:33:22 AM
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smexy i like the hair its awesomoe

 NS-Kage
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  Posted 11/10/2007 05:25:02 PM
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hmm, people really seem to like the hair, can it be is is this the best so far here..XD  

--Last edited by NS-Kage on 2007-10-11 17:25:21 --

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 ShichirouKun
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  Posted 11/10/2007 07:07:50 PM
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looks good i dont see any thing wrong with it..

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 ::SoulReaper::
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  Posted 11/10/2007 07:09:31 PM
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the hair is good but the sprite is kinda bad, the legs look 2 skinny and the chest looks a bit weird and the hand is 2 big and the vest could be more detailed, and better shading could be applyed 6/10 for the body

9/10 for the hair


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 NS-Kage
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  Posted 11/10/2007 07:31:53 PM
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I could apply 5 tone when i'm in the mood..xD and for the vest, it's hard to put much details in such a small sprite

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 super_inferno
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 super_inferno
  Posted 11/10/2007 07:46:40 PM
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if u want to put more details in the sprite, u have to take more time for the sprite.

http://i258.photobucket.com/albums/hh265/super_inferno/nerovsdante.png
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