The old one wasn't so great so here credit to tork chaoz for giving me the general idea and helping me shade some parts.
This is my own public project, so plz do not use. I am a newb at spriting, and i need critism. again i have only sprited 3 other times so dont be so hard on me.



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WOW much much better! looks a lot like goku jr and vegeta jr. fused. its like a mix of lsw and lswa.

Everything looks good to me now 2

well 2 be honest its a start the hands dnt match i hate the oantst he arms r 2 big and dark and ther rest is ok i guess 7/10

skin tones don't really match
and don't like some parts of the hair
and make one with the real gogeta colors too
don't really like these alt. colors
and REALLY big back arm fix that

5/10  

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to me its like gogeta AF

also it has an abnormally large left side pectorial muscle
goes up into his head

ur right it looks like a deforemed bewb

Lol Smart Guy you sure your not angel of hell, you even got the same IP if he is your brother why don't you just shout across the room and tell him whats good and bad about him sprite  

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Jay wrote : Lol Smart Guy you sure your not angel of hell, you even got the same IP if he is your brother why don't you just shout across the room and tell him whats good and bad about him sprite

i've wondered the same thing
also hes always the first to post in his brothers topics  

i did shade using gogeta's colours, but he said to make it darker, i refused knowing that it would scrap the sprite, but guess he did it anyway, i still think this is just lswa, not anything special

u fots 2 fix the right arm and that deformed object on his face other than that no complaints 7.2/10

Pretty much I'm going with everything Bob said, but I'm going to add that the torso looks weird.  It looks like he's just wearing a shirt, rather than a jacket.