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 Link
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  Posted 04/12/2007 11:50:28 PM
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This is my first try at LSW style sprites and I don't know if edits ocunt or not...But here it is! Give constructive comments.I did dif styles of shading to see which one looks best...
http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x68/link99999107/MyGotenks1.png  

--Last edited by link99999107 on 2007-12-04 23:51:19 --

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 BATTouttaHELL
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  Posted 05/12/2007 00:00:04 AM
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um last time i checked dat looks like kid goku...=/ its good 4 a first 8/10

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  Posted 05/12/2007 00:05:23 AM
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i think he meens its goten.

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  Posted 05/12/2007 00:06:01 AM
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oh yeah srry I do mean its goten...srry...

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  Posted 05/12/2007 00:17:44 AM
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oooo but it still looks like kid goku tho

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  Posted 05/12/2007 00:27:58 AM
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Oh well, I gave it my best shot!  

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  Posted 05/12/2007 00:37:06 AM
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well its really good keep up da good work nd u will be da bestest

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  Posted 05/12/2007 01:15:51 AM
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Update! I don't think I'll take it any farther...just for practice. http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x68/link99999107/MyGotenks1-1.png

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  Posted 05/12/2007 01:32:17 AM
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oooo like it ALOT!!!!!!8.9/10 practice nd practice nd practice nd ull be great!!!

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  Posted 05/12/2007 09:58:42 AM
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It's really awesome. I think you should a full sheet! Realy it's 9/10!

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  Posted 05/12/2007 09:59:43 AM
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It's really good, I think you should do a full sheet of that, realy 9/10

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  Posted 05/12/2007 10:52:18 AM
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Okay I guess I will...I have almost no free time right now...but thanks for the comments!

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  Posted 05/12/2007 11:47:39 AM
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http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x68/link99999107/MyGotenks1-2.png It's finished! School was canceled so I had time to finish it! I think its enough...

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  Posted 06/12/2007 00:38:02 AM
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its good but there r a few sprites that have gaps or the hair is misplaced so u need 2 fix dat

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  Posted 06/12/2007 00:39:27 AM
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fix the hairline on the jumping pose.7/10 for a good goten sheet.Try your hardest to add more  

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  Posted 06/12/2007 00:47:00 AM
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nd o yea take ur time wit it never rush a sprite EVER!!!!!

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  Posted 06/12/2007 01:41:17 AM
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The Gotenks call me...
But... is Goten!
Well, it's good
I like it, but is some small

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/4974/scannonzj5.png
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/9137/idontlikenlsw2ke4.png
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  Posted 06/12/2007 02:56:31 AM
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sorry but you make a mistake I think to all of your poses. He is suppose to have long shirt under his uniforme
I mean he is suppose to be like this
http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/300W/i/2003/38/2/d/SSJ_Goten_Screaming.jpg

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  Posted 06/12/2007 12:22:58 AM
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Quote :

Xinuj wrote : sorry but you make a mistake I think to all of your poses. He is suppose to have long shirt under his uniforme
I mean he is suppose to be like this
http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/300W/i/2003/38/2/d/SSJ_Goten_Screaming.jpg



oh...The pic I used for reference didn't have the shirt...and I'll try and fix everything...but take my time now...

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  Posted 06/12/2007 06:01:36 PM
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You know, for being a sort of patched together thing, It's actually not too bad . Tighten it up and it'll look pretty good. It'll be the first goten from here, as far as I know.

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