People who have been here since my better days as a LSW spriter (when I actually did sheets) probably know what I'm going to post.
Dun-dun-duuuuuun...

Yeah, it's meh Broly.
OMG, now with colors straight from Broly: Second Coming.  Woo-hoo!
If I have used anything made by another person, I have personally PMed you and you have responded with approval.
And those who know me well probably have also guessed that no sheet will come of this.  That may or may  not be true.  Since I'm in 11th (almost 12th) grade, I have other, more important things to do.  But I may put something out every now and then.
No whining or complaining about the sprite, just give me some positive comments AND how to improve.   But I will not do any drastic changes to please the members.

With that said, C&C would be nice.

Spritah out~  

--Last edited by Spriter-san on 2008-02-17 16:49:57 --

      wow...that is awesome!  *_*

It's so sweet you scared the Mettaur with it    

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Wow, That's a big broly. Good color choice Looks nice 8/10

wow last i remember you were better than this... im sorry if im being mean but you could sprite better b4...5/10

Sneshy has a point

Those are kick slick awesome, but you're other ones are better.

Everyone who said I could do better- how?
I will fix the eye level on SSJ, and update that either later today or tomorrow.  But still, how can I improve it.  I need specific details on how to do it.

Thanx everyone.

Spritah out~

Well, he's too out of proportion. The size difference is too great from the pecs to the waist, even for Broly. His left hand is...well....poorly made. The fingers just don't look right, and the wrist is too wide. It looks like he is trying to touch his wrist veins with his fingers while making a fist, which is rather unnatural. The lines on the chest make the whole sprite look alot worse than it is. You would do better to shade the chest and darken the line between the pecs than to draw those lines on it, as they stand out too much and are too much darker in comparison to the darkest skin tone. His right arm is much to large in comparison to his left. I know that the right arm should be larger, but it's bulging too much, especially in the shoulder. His eye is too high up on his head. You should lower it or shorten his head. Also, Broly's hair could be shaded better. The shading on it now can hardly be seen. Some of the spikes on the back and bottom of the hair don't really look that good. The bottom one looks like a small duck, and Broly's hair should be more straight and spiky. His skiry-thing needs more variance in the shading, ,perhaps another tone between the lightest and darkest to fill out the middle more.

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Blues Light wrote : Well, he's too out of proportion. The size difference is too great from the pecs to the waist, even for Broly. His left hand is...well....poorly made. The fingers just don't look right, and the wrist is too wide. It looks like he is trying to touch his wrist veins with his fingers while making a fist, which is rather unnatural. The lines on the chest make the whole sprite look alot worse than it is. You would do better to shade the chest and darken the line between the pecs than to draw those lines on it, as they stand out too much and are too much darker in comparison to the darkest skin tone. His right arm is much to large in comparison to his left. I know that the right arm should be larger, but it's bulging too much, especially in the shoulder. His eye is too high up on his head. You should lower it or shorten his head. Also, Broly's hair could be shaded better. The shading on it now can hardly be seen. Some of the spikes on the back and bottom of the hair don't really look that good. The bottom one looks like a small duck, and Broly's hair should be more straight and spiky. His skiry-thing needs more variance in the shading, ,perhaps another tone between the lightest and darkest to fill out the middle more.

Exactly what ol' Blues said.

Blues, you made my day, just by typing up all that criticism. I was going to post a longass post in this topic full of criticism, but you pointed out everything that needs fixing.

IF ONLY MORE PEOPLE WOULD CRITICIZE MORE. -tear-

Anyways, back on topic, after fixing up everything that Blues pointed out, it'd be 100% better, not that it doesn't look decent now.

i think the shading needs a little bit of work to make it the ultimate broly, but other than that, its a cool sprite

Vortex, prepare yourselves...

Credit to Devons (mindboggle) for both LSSJ hands, and don't worry, I got permission.

C&C

Spritah out~

im tellin yah Spriter,this is the best LSW or LSWA Brolly ever.

Thanks, like I said on MSN, I used the arms and torso from my contest-winning Broly to make these new forms.

Spritah out~

Why does he have Cankles ?
And Why Chest Hair ?

How ignorant are you...?
He has scars and ripped pants.
Don't be a retard.

Spritah out~

Wow,

I get called Ignorant and Retarded cause I thought the scars were chesthairs, also, they don't look like rips..

Thanks Spriter, You're a real pal!

Okay- Um..

I'm sorry, but it just looks completely deformed. The chest is facing too forward-like, The muscles are to puffy and big on Base\Restricted\Super Saiyan, The LSSJ is just a mess, and overall, its just.. o_o

I've got to agree with Fortex about the cankle\chest hair thing.

Also, the colors aren't good, at all.

The only positive thing I can think of to say is that the skirt looks good on the first LSSJ and Base Broly's face looks nice.

BAM! dead on bobinashoe

Credit to devons aka mindboggle for the rssj/ssj arms and torsos.

C&C

Spritah out~

the normal and ssj forms are too bulky and buff