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 -Nero-
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 Majin
  Posted 09/03/2008 09:55:13 PM
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I think i got the ssj hair down ok? its 100% custom and im poo at making hair so go easy and leave some good and helpful crits. if you do at all >_>

Trunks:

http://i28.tinypic.com/14y8siu.png

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 .claw.
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 Majin
 .claw.
  Posted 09/03/2008 11:03:31 PM
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the saijin hair could be a little better.

http://dbzvortex.aceboard.com/229463-10421-17500-0-.htm#vb
 -Nero-
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 Majin
  Posted 09/03/2008 11:14:23 PM
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Quote :

.claw. wrote : the saijin hair could be a little better.




Do you have a brain? i said helpful comments.

So say HOW it can be better..

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 Seto Stevce
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 Seto Stevce
  Posted 09/03/2008 11:33:52 PM
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his normal hair is way too shiny, add more of that lighter purple
as for the ssj hair, i love it
good job Nero

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 Lawliet
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 Lawliet
  Posted 10/03/2008 04:31:19 AM
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needs a little more spikes to the side of the SSj, same as set for the normal

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/9862/funwithakatsuki08redclolj4.gif

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 Bobinashoe
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 Super Saiyan 2
  Posted 12/03/2008 06:08:27 AM
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The hair is too bright on the base form, darken it up a bit.

On both sprites, he looks like hes wearing pants instead of the skin tight suit. Try and put more definition on the knee and the muscle surrounding it.

The SSJ's hair needs a LOT of work, considering it looks nothing like Trunks SSJ.
You need to make the hair more split down the middle, and the spikes sticking more to the sides rather then nearly straight up.

And you need to brighten up his suit\overall colors in SSJ.

Heres a reference picture for the legs and ssj hair:

http://www.100megsfree4.com/fleur/dbz/trunks03.gif

Otherwise, I like it. Its more refreshing then the rest of the trunks i've seen on here.

7/10

After fixing it, it'd easily be a 7.5 or a 8.0

Good luck, and good job.

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 -Nero-
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 Majin
  Posted 12/03/2008 07:21:08 AM
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finally bobs back with his crits!

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