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| Author : | Topic: Broly: The Legend...by The_Spriter | Bottom |
| Spriter-san Posts : 376 Super Saiyan |
Here it is: ![]() Read the sheet. C&C please. Rock on Spriter out | |||
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| Dack Posts : 1042 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
Very good. Tone the muscle down a bit. Not your best but really good!!! | |||
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| Spriter-san Posts : 376 Super Saiyan |
Alright guys, I will require a pitched in effort for this sheet-to be. Could the following 4 people help: FoN-For the sprite design and sheet completion. Devons-If it's okay, could we combine our designs? AB-If you can. GodofHell-I would love for you to help. PM me and we'll see what it'll be... Thank you all fo the C&C. Rock on Spriter out | |||
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| Spriter-san Posts : 376 Super Saiyan |
Never mind. I'll go with what devons said. Rock on Spriter out | |||
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| hellmoburnin Posts : 1950 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
Please, I think if you need to ask help on a sprite, then you shouldn't attempt it until you have a little more experience. It's not really nice to bother other spriters that have projects of their own to work on so you can have an easier job with that sprite. I'm not trying to be mean, but like Devons said, try challenging your sprite skills a little, and if it still looks bad then try again later, after some practice. Imagine how hard Devons Brolys must be, and Angryboys' Janembas, and they have to make multiple forms, aswell as about a dozen or more separate good looking poses for all the forms. Please don't get pissed at me, I'm just trying to give some advice about spriting, as for advice on the sprite itself, try making his arms bigger, not the shoulders though, they're good. And get rid of the smile, it doesn't look very good for him. Thank you. oh, wait, you posted right as I did, and I just barely saw it. Nevermind. --Last edited by hellmoburnin on 2007-01-06 02:57:55 -- | |||
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| [Bonecrusher] Posts : 730 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
OMG you are god I worship you!Not really, I just thought it would be good for your ego for me to say that. It looks alright, I really like the pants and what not but the head looks a tad small for my liking. | |||
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| Angryboy admin Posts : 3184 ![]() |
Decrease the shoulder thickness, and he will look damn well decent Spriter. Good work. If you finish this yourself, it'll be your own acomplishment you can be proud of. Trust me, you will be. | |||
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| Spriter-san Posts : 376 Super Saiyan |
Huge update! ![]() Gimme some critz. Rock on Spriter out | |||
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| FlukeBreaker Posts : 1973 Super Saiyan 2 |
Give him a slightly thicker waist so he doesn't have a lightbulb figure. And KUTGW | |||
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| Spriter-san Posts : 376 Super Saiyan |
What the fuck does KUTGW mean? Rock on Spriter out | |||
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| hellmoburnin Posts : 1950 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
that looks alot better yes. but what the other guy said about the waist would be a good touchup. and KUTGW prob'ly means: Kut-Up-The-Giant-Waffle | |||
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| Angryboy admin Posts : 3184 ![]() |
Drop the shoulder abit and its perfect. Thats a f*cking awesome update Spriter. Will you finish this sheet? | |||
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| Spriter-san Posts : 376 Super Saiyan |
Thanks guys, but 2 things I won't do: Cut his abs out(if that's what was meant by giant waffle) And drop the shoulders, that's how he really looks. Updated again though: ![]() Rock on Spriter out | |||
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| Angryboy admin Posts : 3184 ![]() |
Perfect now. My only problem with these Broly's is that they are too big for the LSW look....... | |||
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| hellmoburnin Posts : 1950 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
i think they're perfct cause if they were more lsw style, broly would be as tall as Goku. that doesn't work anyway you cut it. and i didn't say anything about abs, just thought that other dude meant Waffle.BE MO CLEAR DUDE! | |||
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