Here it is:

I was originally putting it in the contest, but that got closed...

Constructive C&C please.

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Nice job
8.9/10

cool 8/10

What can I do to improve on it?

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weren't you working on the Meta Cooler sheet too? I liked that sprite. I liked that sprite. *sigh* 'Kay back to Broly. The strands on LSS are pretty big, and the non LSS sprites have scrawny abs. you should probably make the upper body smaller.

I dont like the normal to ssj broly
the LSSJ ig good

I agree with DL1.  The normal and SSJ Brolys are way too big.  Broly was actually quite slim in those forms and had quite a deal less bulk than what you imply.

He's way to tall in normal form. Hes like Goku's hight. He should only be like, a few inches taller than him.  

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Total wrote : He's way to tall in normal form. Hes like Goku's hight. He should only be like, a few inches taller than him.

Nah, the height's okay.  It's just he's too buff.

yeah the height is fine but base form does need to be more shrimpy

Thanks for the C&C guys, I hope I put it to good use.



Better?

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much better man

I think the body needs a small bit of work. The pectorals needs to be toned down drastically on the lower levels. The Restricted Super Sayian is way to dark compared to the rest of the sprites, and the face on all forms could use a little work. The regular hair could be fixed up a bit as well. You're definitely on the right track though!

spriter these kick ass

The_Spriter, would it be okay if I took a try at editing your Broly a little. Not for a sheet, just a WIP? I think I can fix a few issues I see in your Broly.

I fixed the colors and a few other things.


C&C

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WallsofHell wrote : I think the body needs a small bit of work. The pectorals needs to be toned down drastically on the lower levels. The Restricted Super Sayian is way to dark compared to the rest of the sprites, and the face on all forms could use a little work. The regular hair could be fixed up a bit as well. You're definitely on the right track though!

A lot of what WoH said, I do agree.  But RSSJ looked fine in terms of skin tone.  The bodies do look quite weird, however, and look more deformed than anything else, no offense.