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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 13/02/2007 11:18:14 AM
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Thread on new forum:
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Hand-drawn version!
http://kevtrev.deviantart.com/art/Double-Devotion-Issue-001-68104041

It's finally here; the biggest project I've ever worked on.
Without further delay, I bring you the first issue, which will introduce you to what my comic is all about.

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Prologue, Introduction
Issue 001: The World of Elmandor

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Chapter 01 - Adam's Tournament
Issue 002: Announcement
Issue 003: Preparing for The Day
Issue 004: Fighting a cold battle
Issue 005: Heating things up
Issue 006: Troublesome Thunderbolts
Issue 007: Sturm's Storm
Issue 008: Two Versus One
Issue 009: Confession

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Chapter 02 - The Element Challenge
Issue 010: A Shocking Opponent
Issue 011: Behind the Scenes
Issue 012: Pirad the Pirate
Issue 013: Where's the Water?
Issue 014: Life-changing Memories
Issue 015: Fight in the Forest
Issue 016: No More Games
Issue 017: Bailey's Battle
Issue 018: Fearsome Flames
Issue 019: The Fourth Foe
Issue 020: Mindgames of Dralec
Issue 021: Muscles over Mind?
Issue 022: Fighting Fire with Fire
Issue 023: The Mastermind

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Chapter 03 - Tyranny of Trellian
Issue 024: Clash
Issue 025: A New Goal
Issue 026: Regrets of Trellian
Issue 027: They Are Coming
Issue 028: Trellian Attacks!
Issue 029: Limited to Five
Issue 030: Adam's Plan
Issue 031: One free, Twelve to go
Issue 032: Charging with Courage
Issue 033: Amp's Growth
Issue 034: Desperate Villain
Issue 035: Trellian's Offer
Issue 036: Similiar Goals

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Chapter 04 - Preparation
Issue 037: Sean's Goodbye
Issue 038: A New Mystery
Issue 039: New Challenge
Issue 040: Bailey VS Gravel
Issue 041: The Rage of Brix
Issue 042: Reinforcements?
Issue 043: Mido & Midia
Issue 044: Closing In
Issue 045: Grief for a Villain

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Chapter 05 - Revised and Returned
Issue 046: Welcome Home, Sean
Issue 047: Training Results
Issue 048: Punishment
Issue 049: First Impressions
Issue 050: Raezor Attacks!
Issue 051: Deciding Raezor's Fate

Enjoy!  

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  Posted 13/02/2007 11:21:21 AM
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Pretty damn nice man, hope the next one will come soon!

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 Maistro
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  Posted 13/02/2007 11:24:09 AM
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It seems alright so far but it would be better if you add more uniqueness to each sprite to make them stand out more, because some are rather unique and some look alike to much  

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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  Posted 13/02/2007 11:32:13 AM
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I know what you mean Maistro. But it was a lot of work to make sheets of all of them, and most of the students are just minor characters anyway.

The characters that the story focuses on will be more detailed and unique.

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 Angryboy
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  Posted 13/02/2007 11:57:08 AM
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Good work TT. I can tell this will get interesting and complex. It's just a matter of time, and plan.

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 DragonAndLance
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  Posted 13/02/2007 12:37:28 AM
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Nice job, I like Amp, Raida, Midia, Sturm, Achere, Bailey.

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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  Posted 13/02/2007 12:59:16 AM
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Thank you. It was fun coloring Amp's hair. Aside from Sean and Bailey, he was the first student I made.

And yes, the story will be quite big. I must say that it's a lot more work to make an issue than I expected.
But no worries, that only means that there's more time in between updates. I WILL continue this story to the end.

Oh by the way, AB, I checked your Cold Heart thread for an example of how to make a good chapter-issue layout, and that's when I saw the name of Issue 17...  

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 Angryboy
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  Posted 13/02/2007 01:58:30 PM
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LOL. Well, I thought I might as well add some spice to it, so the end of Chapter 2 will be your Tournament, then everyone comes back later a little different, like Kain (New Attire) and Azuro (2nd Attire). I dont see how my comic is seen as a good layout......lol. Well, good luck to you!

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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  Posted 13/02/2007 02:11:46 PM
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Well, it's not your comic's layout, but the layout that lists all the chapters and issues. I just needed that for reference, so I wouldn't mess up. Lol.

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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  Posted 13/02/2007 03:19:15 PM
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--Issue 2, the first actual issue, is up!

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 Angryboy
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  Posted 13/02/2007 03:30:48 PM
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Good 2nd Issue. It seems very anime styled, which is hard to keep in a sprite comic. (Oh, and I need my layout of the chapters too, not to mess up on anything...good call.)

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 ~Juan Sonic~
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  Posted 13/02/2007 04:06:15 PM
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I agree with what ab said.
its was a great issue and it really felt anime-ish
8/10 for both issues.

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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  Posted 13/02/2007 05:05:40 PM
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Well, issue 3 is up.
If you're looking forward to the fights; they will start next issue.

However in this tournament, I'm not going to give much detail of every match, just Sean & Bailey's matches.
The tournament isn't very important for the story anyway, and if I'd make all the matches it would probably drag on too long.  

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 Danion
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  Posted 13/02/2007 05:11:05 PM
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Damn your fast,and those comics are very well done  

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 ~Juan Sonic~
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  Posted 13/02/2007 05:16:34 PM
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i cant wait for the tournament to start!
good job.
9/10

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 Terror
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  Posted 13/02/2007 06:52:22 PM
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awesome comics

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 Angryboy
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  Posted 13/02/2007 07:11:59 PM
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Damn you are fast at this.....I wish I was..... Good work, and good job on hyping up the tournament.

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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  Posted 13/02/2007 07:42:50 PM
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The fourth issue is up! That will be all for today, though.

Heh, I'm only this fast because I enjoy making the comics. Not to mention I have a crapload of spare time...
Plus I like to entertain the audience here with a good worked-out storyline. It's actually raising my confidence  

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 Danion
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  Posted 13/02/2007 07:52:53 PM
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Thats a really great job well done man

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  Posted 13/02/2007 08:17:34 PM
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(Shocked at the amount of issue's made in 1 day)

Good.....work..... (Still in shock)

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