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| Author : | Topic: Double Devotion (There's now a Hand-drawn version!) | Bottom |
| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
Thread on new forum: http://s3.excoboard.com/exco/thread.php?forumid=22593&threadid=158437 Hand-drawn version! http://kevtrev.deviantart.com/art/Double-Devotion-Issue-001-68104041 It's finally here; the biggest project I've ever worked on.Without further delay, I bring you the first issue, which will introduce you to what my comic is all about. ![]() Prologue, Introduction Issue 001: The World of Elmandor ![]() Chapter 01 - Adam's Tournament Issue 002: Announcement Issue 003: Preparing for The Day Issue 004: Fighting a cold battle Issue 005: Heating things up Issue 006: Troublesome Thunderbolts Issue 007: Sturm's Storm Issue 008: Two Versus One Issue 009: Confession ![]() Chapter 02 - The Element Challenge Issue 010: A Shocking Opponent Issue 011: Behind the Scenes Issue 012: Pirad the Pirate Issue 013: Where's the Water? Issue 014: Life-changing Memories Issue 015: Fight in the Forest Issue 016: No More Games Issue 017: Bailey's Battle Issue 018: Fearsome Flames Issue 019: The Fourth Foe Issue 020: Mindgames of Dralec Issue 021: Muscles over Mind? Issue 022: Fighting Fire with Fire Issue 023: The Mastermind ![]() Chapter 03 - Tyranny of Trellian Issue 024: Clash Issue 025: A New Goal Issue 026: Regrets of Trellian Issue 027: They Are Coming Issue 028: Trellian Attacks! Issue 029: Limited to Five Issue 030: Adam's Plan Issue 031: One free, Twelve to go Issue 032: Charging with Courage Issue 033: Amp's Growth Issue 034: Desperate Villain Issue 035: Trellian's Offer Issue 036: Similiar Goals ![]() Chapter 04 - Preparation Issue 037: Sean's Goodbye Issue 038: A New Mystery Issue 039: New Challenge Issue 040: Bailey VS Gravel Issue 041: The Rage of Brix Issue 042: Reinforcements? Issue 043: Mido & Midia Issue 044: Closing In Issue 045: Grief for a Villain ![]() Chapter 05 - Revised and Returned Issue 046: Welcome Home, Sean Issue 047: Training Results Issue 048: Punishment Issue 049: First Impressions Issue 050: Raezor Attacks! Issue 051: Deciding Raezor's Fate Enjoy! --Last edited by TrunksTrevelyan on 2008-01-05 17:11:29 -- | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| ..:-{/Kanyu\}-:.. Posts : 606 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
Pretty damn nice man, hope the next one will come soon! | |||
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| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
I know what you mean Maistro. But it was a lot of work to make sheets of all of them, and most of the students are just minor characters anyway. The characters that the story focuses on will be more detailed and unique. | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Angryboy admin Posts : 3184 ![]() |
Good work TT. I can tell this will get interesting and complex. It's just a matter of time, and plan. | |||
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| DragonAndLance moderator Posts : 5381 Super Saiyan 3 ![]() |
Nice job, I like Amp, Raida, Midia, Sturm, Achere, Bailey. | |||
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| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
Thank you. It was fun coloring Amp's hair. Aside from Sean and Bailey, he was the first student I made. And yes, the story will be quite big. I must say that it's a lot more work to make an issue than I expected. But no worries, that only means that there's more time in between updates. I WILL continue this story to the end. Oh by the way, AB, I checked your Cold Heart thread for an example of how to make a good chapter-issue layout, and that's when I saw the name of Issue 17... --Last edited by TrunksTrevelyan on 2007-02-13 13:03:27 -- | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Angryboy admin Posts : 3184 ![]() |
LOL. Well, I thought I might as well add some spice to it, so the end of Chapter 2 will be your Tournament, then everyone comes back later a little different, like Kain (New Attire) and Azuro (2nd Attire). I dont see how my comic is seen as a good layout......lol. Well, good luck to you! | |||
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| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
Well, it's not your comic's layout, but the layout that lists all the chapters and issues. I just needed that for reference, so I wouldn't mess up. Lol. | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
--Issue 2, the first actual issue, is up! | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Angryboy admin Posts : 3184 ![]() |
Good 2nd Issue. It seems very anime styled, which is hard to keep in a sprite comic. (Oh, and I need my layout of the chapters too, not to mess up on anything...good call. ) | |||
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| ~Juan Sonic~ Posts : 169 Great Ape |
I agree with what ab said. its was a great issue and it really felt anime-ish 8/10 for both issues. | |||
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| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
Well, issue 3 is up. If you're looking forward to the fights; they will start next issue. However in this tournament, I'm not going to give much detail of every match, just Sean & Bailey's matches. The tournament isn't very important for the story anyway, and if I'd make all the matches it would probably drag on too long. --Last edited by TrunksTrevelyan on 2007-02-13 17:08:57 -- | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Danion Posts : 3277 Majin ![]() |
Damn your fast,and those comics are very well done | |||
![]() Back off Bitch, I iz teh Spriting Judge. Sig and Avy made by JTD |
| ~Juan Sonic~ Posts : 169 Great Ape |
i cant wait for the tournament to start! good job. 9/10 | |||
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| Terror Posts : 1745 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
awesome comics | |||
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| Angryboy admin Posts : 3184 ![]() |
Damn you are fast at this.....I wish I was..... Good work, and good job on hyping up the tournament. | |||
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| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
The fourth issue is up! That will be all for today, though. Heh, I'm only this fast because I enjoy making the comics. Not to mention I have a crapload of spare time... Plus I like to entertain the audience here with a good worked-out storyline. It's actually raising my confidence --Last edited by TrunksTrevelyan on 2007-02-13 19:43:44 -- | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Danion Posts : 3277 Majin ![]() |
Thats a really great job well done man | |||
![]() Back off Bitch, I iz teh Spriting Judge. Sig and Avy made by JTD |
| Angryboy admin Posts : 3184 ![]() |
(Shocked at the amount of issue's made in 1 day) Good.....work..... (Still in shock) | |||
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