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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 04/05/2007 12:38:46 AM
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I saved all the issues on my own harddisk. Might print it out on paper later.

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 04/05/2007 04:24:27 PM
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I'm back with Issue 29 !  

--Last edited by TrunksTrevelyan on 2007-05-04 16:30:24 --

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 04/05/2007 05:10:36 PM
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Another wonderful issue, TT! Keep it up!

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 Maistro
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 Maistro
  Posted 04/05/2007 05:16:24 PM
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Yes indeed a fine comic m8. I just read the issues that i hadn't before and they were very good keep it up ^^

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 DragonAndLance
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 DragonAndLance
  Posted 05/05/2007 01:10:24 AM
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Yes good job TT.

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 JB~LG
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 JB~LG
  Posted 06/05/2007 11:26:16 PM
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and again more great comics wel done TT  
czant wait for more

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Tnx kage for ava
 Garlic
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 Garlic
  Posted 06/05/2007 11:55:54 PM
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Some of the dialouge is corny, but the plot/graphics make up for it. This thing is awesome!

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 07/05/2007 12:12:13 AM
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Thanks for the comments everyone.

devons: Depends. What do you want to use them for?
Garlic: Can you give me an example of corny dialogue? I try to make the dialogue as flawless as possible, while giving just enough information to the reader.

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 07/05/2007 01:01:47 PM
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So far the comic is still keeping me in suspense.

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 07/05/2007 07:38:29 PM
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I see. Well I must say, if all goes as planned, there's going to be a part in the comic where everyone looks older and different.

But go ahead, I'd like to see what you make of 'em.

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 08/05/2007 08:06:29 AM
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I'm curious, too (although I'll be sticking with TT's version of Sean and Bailey...)

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 08/05/2007 11:17:31 AM
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Well, here is issue #30 for y'all.

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 08/05/2007 11:20:24 AM
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Another fantastic issue! Keep up the awesome work!

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 Assasine
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 Assasine
  Posted 08/05/2007 08:22:22 PM
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Yeah i like it :P. It's great work but maybe make longer comics so then you can work more but we will watch it longer and this will be great for us :P. More issuses but smaller text ^^

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 nickmonster
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  Posted 08/05/2007 08:38:11 PM
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i cant wait till more action

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 Assasine
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 Assasine
  Posted 08/05/2007 09:06:46 PM
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I agree with you nickmonster :P. I wonder how many will you make tomorrow. Maybe three, two, one or zero? Make as many as you can this is fantastic!

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 Danion
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 Danion
  Posted 08/05/2007 09:19:22 PM
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I love this comic TT,very original storyline and charachters,hope you can finish him,good luck

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 Superdude66
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 Superdude66
  Posted 08/05/2007 09:32:36 PM
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More C&C.

Okay. I like the way the plot is going. Your story is somewhat cliche, but it is also original in the same story arc.

Allies being possesed is so cliche. Although, you are pulling it off quite well. Also, most Possesion storys go "OMG! We run or fight our allies, then we go beat big bad guys and they will return to normal."

You choose to go into a more original approach. Good.

Overall:

This comic starts out with a not-so-dynamic story, but then, if you go through with reading it, you can see how it progresses into something pretty sweet. I hope that you continue in this pattern.

About the storyline thing I mentioned before. I know how tough it is to come up with a near-perfect story, cliche wise anyway. It's really hard to do. Try and think of something that you haven't really seen done much before. Then, while in the thought process, branch off of that, and make it even better.

That's how I got to the step I am now in the largest project I have ever had planned.

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Rin

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