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| Author : | Topic: Double Devotion (There's now a Hand-drawn version!) | Bottom |
| JB~LG Posts : 3137 Majin ![]() |
wow TT antoher cool episode and this is the first issue you used a zoom (i think)i cant wait for the fight | |||
http://dbzvortex.aceboard.com/229463-10421-17383-0-Matt-Tyler-Ninjya.htm http://dbzvortex.aceboard.com/229463-10421-17749-0-Hero.htm#id266670 Tnx kage for ava |
| Z-Fighter Posts : 1798 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
I can understand that. Anyway I'm looking forward to the 33rd issue. | |||
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| Superdude66 moderator Posts : 5090 Super Saiyan 3 ![]() |
I feel that there is something lacking in the dialouge. I think that Amp's lines are the least dramatic. Instead of "I am Amp!" I would do something else... I'm trying to help you comic grow to it's potential. | |||
![]() Rin Lynn |
| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
I know that, I appreciate your constructive criticism. My intention with Amp's character is that he is naïve and hyper, so without thinking he rushes into battle, introduces himself and all that stuff. I see what you mean; little showoffs like Amp prefer using dramatic entrances, but I guess that slipped my mind when making this issue. | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Z-Fighter Posts : 1798 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
Things like that can happen. | |||
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| nickmonster Posts : 620 Ultra Super Saiyan |
man this comic is so like dbz its really cool | |||
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| JB~LG Posts : 3137 Majin ![]() |
i know its really its really a fucking cool comic (sorry for cursing) | |||
http://dbzvortex.aceboard.com/229463-10421-17383-0-Matt-Tyler-Ninjya.htm http://dbzvortex.aceboard.com/229463-10421-17749-0-Hero.htm#id266670 Tnx kage for ava |
| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
Well, I'm back with nothing less than Issue 033: Amp's Growth | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Z-Fighter Posts : 1798 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
Keep it up! I can't wait for the next one! | |||
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| AlisterPrinceton admin Posts : 1376 The Saiyan Lone Wolf ![]() |
Nice thinking. | |||
![]() ![]() | Name: Dai| Age: 28| | Race: Saiyan|| PL: ?????| | Attacks: ?????| |
| Garlic Posts : 424 Super Saiyan |
GO AMP! | |||
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| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
Quick announcement: Due to complications in the scrïpt, Issue 34 and 35 will be posted at the same time. This means that the next update will be delayed - but for that you'll get two issues, at the same time, in return. | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Z-Fighter Posts : 1798 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
It's ok, TT. We (at least I) understand. | |||
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| nickmonster Posts : 620 Ultra Super Saiyan |
wicked go amp go amp lol | |||
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| Superdude66 moderator Posts : 5090 Super Saiyan 3 ![]() |
I can't get to the prolouge anymore. | |||
![]() Rin Lynn |
| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
Hmm, that stopped working for me too. I'll try reuploading it. edit: It's back up. --Last edited by TrunksTrevelyan on 2007-05-25 16:43:17 -- | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Z-Fighter Posts : 1798 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
I have saved it on my harddisk, so at least you have a back-up source, TT! | |||
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| Superdude66 moderator Posts : 5090 Super Saiyan 3 ![]() |
Also, in the Chapter title, it's spelled Tyranny. | |||
![]() Rin Lynn |
| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
It is? Thought it'd be 'tiranny', from 'tiran'... guess I'll have to change it then. | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
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