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 JB~LG
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 Majin
 JB~LG
  Posted 18/05/2007 07:13:29 PM
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wow TT antoher cool episode and this is the first issue you used a zoom (i think)
i cant wait for the fight

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Tnx kage for ava
 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 18/05/2007 07:16:28 PM
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Oh it's not the first issue that I used a zoom in.
The prologue has a lot, and over the course of the rest I've done some occasional zoom-ins.
The fact that they're so rare is because I don't feel it fits into this comic very well.

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 18/05/2007 07:24:27 PM
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I can understand that. Anyway I'm looking forward to the 33rd issue.

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 Superdude66
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 Superdude66
  Posted 18/05/2007 10:00:54 PM
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I feel that there is something lacking in the dialouge. I think that Amp's lines are the least dramatic.

Instead of "I am Amp!" I would do something else...

I'm trying to help you comic grow to it's potential.

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 19/05/2007 09:21:37 AM
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I know that, I appreciate your constructive criticism.

My intention with Amp's character is that he is naïve and hyper, so without thinking he rushes into battle, introduces himself and all that stuff.

I see what you mean; little showoffs like Amp prefer using dramatic entrances, but I guess that slipped my mind when making this issue.

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 19/05/2007 10:14:57 AM
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Things like that can happen.

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 nickmonster
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  Posted 19/05/2007 04:08:40 PM
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man this comic is so like dbz its really cool

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 JB~LG
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 JB~LG
  Posted 19/05/2007 09:25:06 PM
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i know its really its really a fucking cool comic (sorry for cursing)

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Tnx kage for ava
 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 21/05/2007 05:12:36 PM
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Well, I'm back with nothing less than Issue 033: Amp's Growth

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 21/05/2007 05:34:47 PM
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Keep it up! I can't wait for the next one!

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 AlisterPrinceton
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 AlisterPrinceton
  Posted 22/05/2007 02:48:15 AM
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Nice thinking.

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 Garlic
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 Garlic
  Posted 22/05/2007 02:58:25 AM
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GO AMP!

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 22/05/2007 04:59:06 PM
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Quick announcement: Due to complications in the scrïpt, Issue 34 and 35 will be posted at the same time.

This means that the next update will be delayed - but for that you'll get two issues, at the same time, in return.

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 22/05/2007 05:22:33 PM
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It's ok, TT. We (at least I) understand.

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 nickmonster
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  Posted 24/05/2007 01:47:40 AM
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wicked
go amp
go amp
lol

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 Superdude66
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 Superdude66
  Posted 25/05/2007 04:27:36 PM
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I can't get to the prolouge anymore.

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 25/05/2007 04:36:19 PM
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Hmm, that stopped working for me too. I'll try reuploading it.

edit: It's back up.  

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 25/05/2007 04:39:30 PM
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I have saved it on my harddisk, so at least you have a back-up source, TT!

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 Superdude66
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 Superdude66
  Posted 25/05/2007 05:41:22 PM
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Also, in the Chapter title, it's spelled Tyranny.

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 25/05/2007 06:25:02 PM
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It is? Thought it'd be 'tiranny', from 'tiran'... guess I'll have to change it then.

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