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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 05/07/2007 12:57:01 AM
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Suwpwise!
Issue 041 has arrived.smile/thumb.gif

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 05/07/2007 01:26:54 PM
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smile/eek.gif Wow...





















Fantastic!

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 FlukeBreaker
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 FlukeBreaker
  Posted 05/07/2007 05:03:44 PM
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Oh noes! Things are getting intense.

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 JB~LG
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 JB~LG
  Posted 05/07/2007 05:45:19 PM
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COOL new episode! there are suprises in here!!
LOVE IT TT

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 Superdude66
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  Posted 05/07/2007 07:28:27 PM
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I can tell that you are trying to make things better than ever before, and I admire that.

The main problem is how you had one whole panel with just a normal sized Face-set matched with a "Rarrhhh" sound.

Also, the blood seems a little bit bland. I would make it a bit more visible, and add some white to it, as a shine. Blood is not just one straight red color, it's more than one shade, and some reflects light.

Like the turn of events though.

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 The Huggable Tay Bear
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 The Huggable Tay Bear
  Posted 05/07/2007 07:35:08 PM
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Whoa...just whoa...what a surprise...holy jesus...

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 The Elysian
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  Posted 05/07/2007 08:14:47 PM
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wow TT nice ep man, nice twist

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 Superdude66
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  Posted 05/07/2007 08:30:36 PM
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To tell you the truth, and I'm being honest.

Bad guy killing his team-mate/henchmen is done before.

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 AlisterPrinceton
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  Posted 06/07/2007 00:36:48 AM
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Yes but those two are supposed to be a mighty team. That's very good. I loved that issue above all others.

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 The Huggable Tay Bear
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 The Huggable Tay Bear
  Posted 06/07/2007 01:29:15 AM
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Quote :

AlisterPrinceton wrote : Yes but those two are supposed to be a mighty team. That's very good. I loved that issue above all others.



Exactly.  That's what made it such a good issue.

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 Voken
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 Voken
  Posted 06/07/2007 02:27:02 AM
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Poor Gravel. Tsk tsk. Didn't stand a chance. Brix.... Where did you get that name? Anyway, nice issue. About time something like that happened. It adds up the suspense and the action.

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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  Posted 06/07/2007 08:55:41 AM
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Yeah, the point was for it to be the same effect if Burter suddenly killed Jeice or something.

There's bound to be a lot more cliché things in the upcoming issues, but I guess that's inevitable.

How I got Brix' name? It's simple really.
Earth Element -> Stone -> Bricks -> Brix.

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 06/07/2007 10:33:26 AM
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I like the way you think up those names...

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 JB~LG
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  Posted 06/07/2007 11:56:24 AM
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hahahah TT you think just like me i think like that 2

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 Superdude66
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  Posted 06/07/2007 02:33:11 PM
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Quote :

TrunksTrevelyan wrote :
There's bound to be a lot more cliché things in the upcoming issues, but I guess that's inevitable.




I know what you mean. That happens to me, more often than not. I'd suggest to try and do it in an original way.

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 AlisterPrinceton
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 AlisterPrinceton
  Posted 08/07/2007 05:47:58 AM
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Quote :

LittleGohan wrote : hahahah TT you think just like me i think like that 2



Thats not very creative I make p names by using other languages (my favorite Latin!)

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 08/07/2007 02:22:32 PM
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I do throw in the occasional dutch pun for my characters.

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 Z-Fighter
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 Z-Fighter
  Posted 08/07/2007 02:28:43 PM
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You do?! PM me about it, I'm curious...

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 JB~LG
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 JB~LG
  Posted 08/07/2007 03:28:22 PM
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Quote :

Z-Fighter wrote : You do?! PM me about it, I'm curious...



yea me too!

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 TrunksTrevelyan
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 TrunksTrevelyan
  Posted 09/07/2007 10:40:28 AM
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Well, Sturm for example.

Here in the Netherlands, we say the same as the English do when it rains hard; 'Storm'.
However, add a little bit of dutch accent or dialect whatever you wanna call it, and you get Sturm.

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