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| Author : | Topic: Double Devotion (There's now a Hand-drawn version!) | Bottom |
| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
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My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Z-Fighter Posts : 1798 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
Wow... Fantastic! | |||
![]() ![]() W.I.P. sprite sheets: Orochi - 70% God Orochi - 40% |
| JB~LG Posts : 3137 Majin ![]() |
COOL new episode! there are suprises in here!! LOVE IT TT | |||
http://dbzvortex.aceboard.com/229463-10421-17383-0-Matt-Tyler-Ninjya.htm http://dbzvortex.aceboard.com/229463-10421-17749-0-Hero.htm#id266670 Tnx kage for ava |
| Superdude66 moderator Posts : 5090 Super Saiyan 3 ![]() |
I can tell that you are trying to make things better than ever before, and I admire that. The main problem is how you had one whole panel with just a normal sized Face-set matched with a "Rarrhhh" sound. Also, the blood seems a little bit bland. I would make it a bit more visible, and add some white to it, as a shine. Blood is not just one straight red color, it's more than one shade, and some reflects light. Like the turn of events though. | |||
![]() Rin Lynn |
| The Huggable Tay Bear moderator Posts : 4571 Majin ![]() |
Whoa...just whoa...what a surprise...holy jesus... | |||
![]() KoRtFTbAlliin316 (12:00:29 AM): I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE BANNER U MADE ME KoRtFTbAlliin316 (12:00:34 AM): MAKES ME WANNA RAPE U |
| The Elysian moderator Posts : 3045 Majin |
wow TT nice ep man, nice twist | |||
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| Superdude66 moderator Posts : 5090 Super Saiyan 3 ![]() |
To tell you the truth, and I'm being honest. Bad guy killing his team-mate/henchmen is done before. | |||
![]() Rin Lynn |
| AlisterPrinceton admin Posts : 1376 The Saiyan Lone Wolf ![]() |
Yes but those two are supposed to be a mighty team. That's very good. I loved that issue above all others. | |||
![]() ![]() | Name: Dai| Age: 28| | Race: Saiyan|| PL: ?????| | Attacks: ?????| |
| The Huggable Tay Bear moderator Posts : 4571 Majin ![]() |
Exactly. That's what made it such a good issue. | ||||
![]() KoRtFTbAlliin316 (12:00:29 AM): I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE BANNER U MADE ME KoRtFTbAlliin316 (12:00:34 AM): MAKES ME WANNA RAPE U |
| Voken Posts : 624 Ultra Super Saiyan |
Poor Gravel. Tsk tsk. Didn't stand a chance. Brix.... Where did you get that name? Anyway, nice issue. About time something like that happened. It adds up the suspense and the action. | |||
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| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
Yeah, the point was for it to be the same effect if Burter suddenly killed Jeice or something. There's bound to be a lot more cliché things in the upcoming issues, but I guess that's inevitable. How I got Brix' name? It's simple really. Earth Element -> Stone -> Bricks -> Brix. | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Z-Fighter Posts : 1798 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
I like the way you think up those names... | |||
![]() ![]() W.I.P. sprite sheets: Orochi - 70% God Orochi - 40% |
| JB~LG Posts : 3137 Majin ![]() |
hahahah TT you think just like me i think like that 2 ![]() | |||
http://dbzvortex.aceboard.com/229463-10421-17383-0-Matt-Tyler-Ninjya.htm http://dbzvortex.aceboard.com/229463-10421-17749-0-Hero.htm#id266670 Tnx kage for ava |
| Superdude66 moderator Posts : 5090 Super Saiyan 3 ![]() |
I know what you mean. That happens to me, more often than not. I'd suggest to try and do it in an original way. | ||||
![]() Rin Lynn |
| AlisterPrinceton admin Posts : 1376 The Saiyan Lone Wolf ![]() |
Thats not very creative I make p names by using other languages (my favorite Latin!) | ||||
![]() ![]() | Name: Dai| Age: 28| | Race: Saiyan|| PL: ?????| | Attacks: ?????| |
| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
I do throw in the occasional dutch pun for my characters. | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
| Z-Fighter Posts : 1798 Super Saiyan 2 ![]() |
You do?! PM me about it, I'm curious... | |||
![]() ![]() W.I.P. sprite sheets: Orochi - 70% God Orochi - 40% |
| JB~LG Posts : 3137 Majin ![]() |
yea me too! | ||||
http://dbzvortex.aceboard.com/229463-10421-17383-0-Matt-Tyler-Ninjya.htm http://dbzvortex.aceboard.com/229463-10421-17749-0-Hero.htm#id266670 Tnx kage for ava |
| TrunksTrevelyan Posts : 988 Ultra Super Saiyan ![]() |
Well, Sturm for example. Here in the Netherlands, we say the same as the English do when it rains hard; 'Storm'. However, add a little bit of dutch accent or dialect whatever you wanna call it, and you get Sturm. | |||
My comic is now being REVAMPED pencil & paper-style: PM me for the link! |
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