cool attack

I'm starting to read this now. Only gotten into two issues, but what i've seen so far - I think it's pretty good. The characters sure are repetitive, though - and the fights could be better and more detailed.

But it's still good from what i've seen.

7.5/10.

I'll be reading more issues shortly!

I agree Bob, the first two chapters are kind of mediocre and repetitive. After I've posted all the issues here, I hope to revamp some of the storyline, perfect it as much as possible, and work it out as a full-drawn comic - possibly even publish it someday?

But anyway, Bobinashoe, to keep you going, I'll tell you this: As my experience increases, the comic gets better and better as it goes along.  

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I agree, TT. You're comic is getting better and better.

By the way, can someone confirm for me that "Grief for a Villain" is grammatically correct? My Uber Leet English Skillz don't seem to have the answer.

I think it's indeed Grief.

Wow, Adam kicked the spot right there.

Great issue once again!
But on the pic were Mido says 'sis, I feel generous'(or something) it looks like Brix's crying.  

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LOL you're right, it does look like he's crying.
Anyway, he's supposed to be holding his head in pain.

Funny you should mention Brix & crying though, as the next issue is called "Grief for a Villain"... DUN DUN DUN!!!

I love those puns...

Nice issue once again,i like that there is once awhile a comic here that actually reaches over 40 issues.

Can't wait for moar.

TrunksTrevelyan is a dedicated person. Just like me. I bet I must be either the only one or one of the few whose animated sprite movie reaches over 200 issues... I'm working on Part 226!

It's the conclusion to Chapter 4, Issue 045 .

Not the most action-packed one of 'em all, but it can't all be punch-punch-kick-die. Enjoy

I R OUTPOSTING Z-FIGHTER ON AN UPDATE FOR ONCE ZOMG.

Anyway: They all seem to forgive him a little bit too easily, in my opinion. I would have expected one of them to actually still think it's a trick or something.

Regardless, it was still good.

Another nice issue once again.

Yeah, I had a bit of doubt as to whether he was pulling a dirty trick or being sincere. It seems like the trashing Adam gave him made him turn, simply in surrender. Fine issue, and fine series.

I can't wait to see the next issue...

It actually slipped my mind that some of the cast would find it awkward. Guess that's a note for a future revamp of the storyline.
It felt a little bit cliché to have Brix turn, but I didn't think it would be any better to just kill off all of Trellian's minions one by one. So I spared this lil' rockin' dude.


Now to go and think of a good cliché future moment for Brix to return... or not. Mwhahaha.  

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And it also shows that the main characters are no killers. I think that HUMILIATION can be even WORSE than death.

man i am away for 4 weeks and you made hell alot of issues!

well it still rocks! the story is awsome you make your own carathers and your own attacks and own poses! this comic is really the bom!!
please keep it up like this!!
comic so far 10/10