Zanes space shuttle opens and he peers out to find a green planed with a lot of tree's and small cliffs... zane steps out and breaths in the namek air...

Zane: ahhhh nice... namek looks nice... i gues i should train here for a while until someone senses my power...

zane charges his energy a little and runs and dives into the namekian waters, he swims under the water and checks out the namek sea life when he see's a giant fish coming right for him!.. he dodges the fishes attack and gathers a ki blast and fires it off creating an opening for him to fly out of...

Zane: phew i thought i was guna get eaten by that giant fish!!!...

zane floats over to a nearby cliff and checks out the surrounding scenery... then he spost someone flying coming towards him....

Zane: i wonder who that is??!!?

then zane starts to see clearer and he can see that it's a namekian.. the namekian lands and comes up to zane...

namekian: who are you! i sensed your energy your a saiyan!...

Zane: im Zane and yep im a saiyan but im here to train not to hurt anyone...

namekian: hmmm... if what you say is true then i can leave you be... i am krino! a warrior trained to protect my race... so if you are her to train.. then let us spar together..

zane: awsome... but i warn you i am no puchover!...

krino:hmph i warn you saiyan! i will kill you if you try anything...

then the namekian charged at zane leaving dust in his trail... zane charged at the namekian and they both threw a punch clashing fists sending off sparks... zane flipped back but the namekian just stood there... zane went back in this time going in with his kneww but the namekian pushed down on his knee and flipped over zane kicking him in the back of the head making zane lose his balance...

Zane: hahaha your playing with me!... i guess ill have to take it up a notch... haaaa

zane raised his power a little to match the namekians power...

krino:hmmmm that's it! im done sparring...

the namekian just flew off leaving zane standing there confused ...

Zane:??? where did he go?? oh well i guess it's back to training on my own again.,....

zane jumped down off the cliff and landed on the grass below...

Zane:this planed must have more than one warrior here!!!

zane got up and flew off into the air...he flew mainly north but sensed something to the east and changed direction...

Zane: woah that power was amazing i gotta checkit out!!..

zane blasted over to the power in seconds... when he stood there he seen a tall figure, but it wasn't namekian..

Zane: hey, who are you!..

???: i am the 1 who will destroy this planet!! and bring the changeling race back to all its glory!...

the figure turned around and looked shocked...

???: A SAIYAN MONKEY!!!..

zane looks angry and gets into his battle stance...

Zane: Monkey!!! how dare you insult my race!!..

zane charges the guy and throws a punch at his face but the changeling dodges and delivers a knee to zanes gut!...

Zane: ahhh.... wh...who are you!

???:i am Fira of the changleing race and you are my next victim saiyan...

fira grabbed zanes head and held onto him whilst he charged down towards the ground... zane used his instant transmission and teleports above him...

Zane: wow this guy's strong... i'll use my new transformation!!.. HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...

Zane transformed into his giji form doubling his power and giving him a energetic aura...

fira: hahaha you think that will save you monkey!.. i will kill you no matter what... HAAAAAAAAAA

fira's body began morphing, two large spikes grew out of his head and his wrist and he became taller...

fira: this is my 5th form and it's the last thing you'll be seing!!

zane charges towards fira and teleports behind him... zane then punches him in the back and then kicks him in the neck sending him sideways.. zane doesnt give hime time to recover...

Zane: haaaa soul fist!!!

zane rushes over and punches the changeling in the face breaking his nose... he goes to punch him again but fira shifts his head sideways and raises his arm...

fira: hahaha ...

zane: looks up and theres a massive ball of fire in the air..

Zane: what the... how did you get your energy so fast!...

fira points his finger at zane and the ball flies towards zane...

Zane: well here goes nothing!!... SOUL ENERGY!!!!!!

zane glows with his energy and throws his arms together to block the attack... the ball hits and zane is lashed with flames from the blast...

Zane: ahhh it's to hot i can't take it!..

Fira: hahaha hows my flame ball saiyan!

zane loses his temper and his rage infuses him with power to throw the ball into space.....

Zane: It's gone!

zane charged into fira and delivered a punch to the side of his and then another to the other side of his head.. then uppercuts him in the jaw sending him upwards and then teleports above him and uses his Soul wave tech...

Zane: SOUL WAVE FULL POWER!!!!!!

fira: NOOOOOOOOOOO!

zane releases the blast and it cuts straight through fira causing him to disintagrate....

Zanehew a changeling huh.. there strong as nails...

zane powers down and lands on the ground below...

Zane: man i need some rest...

zane falls asleep and dreams that he is under attack by changelings and just as they are about to finish him off he awakes...

Zane: NO! ... o it was just a dream...

zane awakes in a small room and he's laying in a bed...

Zane: where am i??!

a namekian walks in after hearing zane screaming!!

namekian: are you ok? i heard you screaming...

zane:yeh it was just a dream.. what am i doing here? i was asleeo by a tree and then..

namekian: we found you injured so we thought we could aid you in your healing.. after all you destroyed that changeling that was going to kill us all...

Zane looks stunned and then asks..

Zane:how do you know about that fight??..

namekian: one of our warriors said that he sparred with you briefly and that he sensed you training..

Zane: oh ye ummm krino i think it was... so thanks for ya help but i gotta go...

zane gets out of the bed and walks out of the room only to bump into krino...

Krino: i see your healed... about earlier.. thank you.. you helped me and my kind... i would not have defeated Fira..

Zane: but when we sparred you were toying with me!!..

krino: no i was at max power i was trying to find fira...

zane looks puzzled ..

zane: o well... i wasn't about to let a planet be destroyed by sum!.. i gotta go so good luck with your training and thanks for ya help...

Zane raised his hand to his head and used his instant transmission technique to get back to his shuttle...

zane gets into his shuttle sets off for earth..  

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After his last visit to namek zane decides that he will go again and say hi to Krino and the others…

Zane: ahhhhhh… good old namek, gotta love this place..

Zane raises his hand to his head and thinks of krino and uses his instant transmission to get there…but when he does he is shocked to find that krino is laying there beaten an cut…

Zane: krino!!! What happened! NO….

Krino:I…It’s…..

Zane: Rest don’t speak…

Zane picks up krino amd takes him to a nearby house and lays him in the bed…

Zane: I will kill whoever it was that done this!!

Zane goes outside and looks around… all he can see are dead namekians and destroyed buildings.. he flies into the air so he can get a better view of his surroundings and to see if he can sense anyone…

Zane: hmmm there’s nobody alive…

Then as he turns around he gets punched and is sent spiralling into the ground….zane rises and stands looking around puzzled..

Zane: you up there!!! Did you do all this!!!

???:hahaha fool…

The unknown figure disappears and reappears in front of zane..

???:I am kakkashi an assassin and I was hired by someone to destroy krino… so I thought that I’d take the rest of the village with him hahahaha..

Zane: you monster!!! You’ll pay for this!!

Zane throws a punch at kakkashi but is too fast to hit and counters with a ki blast to zanes face…zane falls back and regains balance… he charges at kakkashi with anger and goes to punch kakkashi but as he gets closer he opens his and and uses his sou wave… kakkashi is unharmed by the attack…

Zane: what the…..!

Kakkashi: hahaha goodbye…

Kakkashi spins around and hits zane with his tail and sends zane flying into the house where krino was lying… amongst the rubble zane gets up and asks krino..

Zane: krino what is he!!!...

Krino:h…he’s a ledgendary changeling known as kakkashi.. b… be careful…

Zane:no krino wake up… don’t die …

Krino draws his last breath and passes away…

Zane: nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Zane gets up and transforms into his giji form… he then charges at kakkashi and teleports behind him…

Kakkashi:what the…

Zane spins around and trips up kakkashi, then he kicks him into the air sending him flying.. zane chases after him and goes to punch him in the back but kakkashi teleports and evades the attack…

Kakkashi: so you are the one that destroyed my brother fira!... you will be killed for what you did…

Zane: WHAT!!! Your’e his brother.. but your so much stronger and you haven’t transformed!!

Kakkashi laughs and teleports infront of zane…

Kakkashi: I trained lets leave it at that..

Kakkashi throws a punch in zanes direction but zane catches his fist…

Zane: hmmm obviousy!

Zane punches kakkashi repeatedly whilst holding his arm so he cannot move… almost as kakkashi was his punch bag… punch after punch kakkashi was weakend until there was a blinding light… kakkashi and zane both stopped and then it happened..

Kakkashi: ahhhh what is that!..

Zane: I cant see anything!!..

Zane and kakkashi blinded by the light which came out of nowhere waited for the light to fade.. they then could see that all the namekians had gone and that they were in a desolate area…

???: you have been transported to the outskirts of namek so that you don’t destroy our planet.. I am the guru…

Kakkashi and zane looking confused just continued with there furious battle… zane charged and threw a kick at him but kakkashi teleported and interlocked his fists and sent him flying down into the wasteland below… zane rose and in anger fired off his soul wave…

Zane: SOUL WAVE HAAAA…..

Kakkashi didn’t have time to dodge and was hit but didn’t lose his balance, but then zane started to notice kakkashi was morphing.. he was transforming into his 5th form… zane could only stand and watch as this monster became even more powerful.

Kakkashi: haaaaaaaaa. You may have seen this form before saiyan!!!

Kakkashi charged down at zane and grabbed his head… he then threw zane ahead of him and teleported above him and stamped on his chest crushing him between the concrete and kakkashi foot… zane could feel his chest crushing under the immense pressure until he heard Krino..

Krino: kill him zane… for namek…

Zane grabbed kakkashi’s foot and lifted his leg off, he stood and threw kakkashi over his head and slammed him into the ground, then he threw him into the air and chased him screaming soul energy… using this he flew into kakkashi tackling him and threw him into a nearby cliff shattering the cliff….kakkashi got up put of the rubble and screamed death beam… the beam struck zane in the arm piercing traight through because zane powered down his soul energy…

Zane: ARHHHH my arm!!

Kakkashi: hahaha welcome to hell my friend..

Kakkashi charges for zane but zane teleports to the ground…

Zane: think… think… that’s it!

Zane uses his soul energy again this time at its maximum power and then looks up to kakkashi..

Zane: it’s over!!!

Kakkashi: hahaha never..

Zane then uses his soul wave and flies into it but the soul energy is protecting him from being harmed.. He then uses his soul fist and Heads for kakkashi with this devastating combo…

Kakkashi: no… how is it he is killing our race!!!

Zane hits kakkashi but the impact is too much and zane is knocked unconscious….when he wakes he see’s kakkashi lying down with a gaping hole in his chest and zane is covered in blood with a hole in his arm from the death beam…

Zane: I guess this time there was no namekians to help me out…I better get to my capsule…

Zane uses his instant transmission and gets to his spaceship…he enters and throws off his jacket and gets a bandage… he then wraps it round his arm and sits down…

Zane hits in the co-ordinates for earth and lays to rest….

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