After finishing his training on new vegeta, zane has grown in strength immensely… he now feels that he is ready to advance to the next level…he heard of the legendary super saiyan 2 form and realised that he wanted to advance to the next level…

Zane: hmmm I know I have the power… I need to advance!... soon I will e able to match up to takeo and scar…

Zane uses his instant transmission and goes to new namek… he walks to the edge of a cliff he lands on and sits on the edge…

Zane: naamek is such a beautiful place… especially seeing as its had so many battles and invaders…

Zane gets up and stretches his arms… he jumps of the cliff and into the sea… he swims under the surface and takes a look at the namek life… he see’s a huge fish and decides that it would be best if he got out of the sea…

Zane: why are all the fish so freaking big!!! I have to train..

Zane flew over the namekian land searching or someone or somhwhere to train when he come across two namekians training… he flew down and landed to watch…

The two namekians were going all out not leaving any gaps for fault…

Kail: what’s the matter can’t you handle it!

Vail: silence brother do not pity me!!

Zane was stunned to find out that the namekians were brothers… zane sat on a nearby rock and watched…

Kail charged at vail and stretched his arms and punched him… zane fell of f the rock in shock and sits there…

Vail gets annoyed by this attack and charges at kail and throws a kick at him but it’s so slow that kail has enough time to dodge it and trip him up…

Kail:your not ready to train with me yet… your not strong enough you have to train…

Zane smile and thinks back to when him and takeo training.. and how he wasn’t strong enough…

Zane: hey guy’s ummm could I train with you…

The two namekians turned and looked at zane… they walked over to him and stood by him…

Kail: of what race are you stranger… you know me and my brother are namekians yes?

Zane: yes of course I do… and I am a saiyan…

The two namekians turned around and started to walk off… until they realised that two strangers who were here not that long ago… saved them from the android…

Kail: are you zane by any chance saiyan??

Zane: yes I am why?

The namekians walked back over to him and looked him up and down…

Kail: then thank you! For destroying that android…

Zane smiles and scratches his head..

Zane: umm it was no problem my friend takeo helped me out… I love this planet… one of my favourite places in the galaxy in fact…

The namekians smiled and got into there battle stance…

Kail: if you defeated that android than you are strong enough to take us both on saiyan!...

Zane jumped back and got into his battle stance… he powered up a little to the same level as the stronger out of the two nameks which was kail…

Zane: I wont hold back…

Zane charged at them and fired a ki blast at vail knocking him over and threw a punch at kail… but he dodged and spun kick zane hitting him in the head knocking him off balance… that gave vail the opportunity to send a punch at zane knocking him off his feet…

Zane: I see… you two are so much stronger when you fight side by side… you have good fighting spirit together…

The two namekians look at each other and then charged at him..zane used his instant transmission and got behind the namekians….and jumped out to kick both of them in the back.. but they spun and grabbed his legs and spun him around throwing him into a nearby cliff…

Zane: damn… I cant get to them when there together like this…

Zane gets up out of the rubble and powers up a little more to surpass kail… the two namekians were lready on there way and the fired a ki blast at the same time… they combined and became a huge blast…

Zane: oh crap…

he tried to dodge but it clipped his leg and tore his pants and spun him around…they wouldn’t let up laying back into zane kicking and punching him when he was down…

zane: g….guy’s come on let me up…

They didn’t let him up so zane had to do it… he transformed into his giji form and knocked them back with his aura…

Zane: you made me go to this level…

The namekians smiled and powered up… they were the same power level as zane..

Zane: w…what.. I couldn’t sense your energy before this….idiot!! they were masking it!...

Zane used his soul energy technique and powered up his soul fist…. … he charged at the namkians and remembered the fist attack he done… when he fire a ki blast it confused them… zane fired three ki blasts and teleported behind them… confused by the energy of the blast zane had time to strike… he sweeped both there legs and used his soul wave and sent them skidding along the floor…
Zane teleported into the air and started to charge his new attack… the soul hadou…

Zane: I hope you like this one guy’s…. haaaaaa

Zanes aura surrounded him and a small ball of energy began to gather….. zane fired it off leaving a burst of energy firing out of his hands and hits then nameks… with there combined power they throw it away with ease and laughed…

Kail: is that all you have saiyan… if you want to hurt us your going to have to increase your power again!..

Zane smiled and started to raise his power again. .then he burst into his super siyan form giving him a yellow aura…

Kail: brother this is going to get tough be careful!..
Vail: okay bro…

Zane charged down and teleported masking his energy from them… then reappeared in front of them startling them… he smiled and threw a punch a kail but he dodged… zane instantly done a bicycle kick at vail and connected with his jaw flipping him backwards…

Kail: no! don’t lay a hand on him!

Kail grabbed zane’s shoulders and headbutted him but zane just stood his ground and a little grin began to appear…

Zane: I didn’t it was my foot…

Zane head butted kail back sending him flying into his brother who was getting up… zane powered down and looked at the two namekians…

Zane: I don’t think you can handle my power at this moment in time…. I’ll be back later…

Zane took off and flew to a nearby village to rest for a while….
The two namekians looked at each other..

Kail: have you heard of fusion brother..

Vail: yes why??

Kail looked at him and smiled…

Kail: if we did it we could become more powerful than zane!...

Vail: i.. I don’t know bro it lasts forever…

In that moment kail smiled and said…

Kail: okay bro it was just a last resort thing… shall we train….

They took there battle stance and started to train again meanwhile zane was in the village…

Zane: man all the villagers look the same here??!? I’d hate it if humans did…

Zane decide that there was nothing else to see in the village and used his instant transmission to get back to kail and vail… they were going at it full power… the battleground was destroyed and there were it of rock everywhere…

Zane: woah these guys’s have been going at it…

Zane walked over to them while they were taking a break and spoke to them…

Zane: hey guy’s you two sure have been going at it!!!

Kail: that is the only way to become stronger!

Vail: yes… especially if we want to defeat you…

Zane: well you should go rest and then when your healed we should spar again..

The nameks smiled and said..

Kail: the next time we ‘spar’ only two will stand… me and my brother…

Zane smiled and then laughed… the two namekians then went into a meditated state and started to rest…

Zane: I guess I can rest aswell…

Zane falls asleep and decides to rest until they have fully healed and are ready to train again…

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After zane awakes from his rest he see’s only one namekian training?..

Zane: wheres your bro kail…

Kail: he’s right here!..

Kail smiles and powers up… zane can sense both kail and vail’s energy …. He walks other to the new namekian and stands in front of him…

Zane: so did you eat him?!?

Kail: hahaha no he decided he wanted to fuse so here we are…

Zane looks stunned and smiles…

Zane: your power is so much stronger now!... you will be a good training partner..so lets do it!..

Zane goes into his battle stance…and so does the new namekian… they charge at each other and both threw there fists at each other… zane felt his fist cracking under the pressure and was thrown back…

Zane: damn your strength has increased loads…im going to have to go to super saiyan to stand a chance…haaaaaaa

Zane powers up and transforms… he charges back at the namek and kicks him full power in his neck… the namek just stands there and smiles…

Namek: hahaha I am far more powerful then you now saiyan!...

He grabs zanes leg and throws him into the air.. he teleports after him and throws him back down sending a ki blast with it which sends zane hurling into the ground…zane gets up out of the rubble and looks up… as soon as he does he’s hit full force by the namek crushing him between the ground and the nameks legs,..

Zane: ahhhhh… are you trying to kill me!!

Namek: no just hurt you…I thought you wanted to train!..

Zane managed to struggle out of the hold and punched the namek again… but he just stood there… zane decided that he was no where near strong enough to damage him!!!...
Just at that moment the namek grabbed his neck and started to tighten his grip…

Namek: had enough!!

Zane: I will never give up!! I will find the power from somewhere!

The namek laughed and tightened.. he laughed and then he smiled…zane felt his life being drained and then he heard it again…it was scar..

Scar: you are pathetic saiyan!

Those words went through zane and that’s when he felt it… a new power… it released itself and threw the namek into a nearby cliff… zane stood there with his usual yellow aura but something was different… he had electricity around him and his power had increased again… he walked over to the namek and picked hi mout of the rubble… the namek was stunned!!..

Name: h….how did you get this much power…

Zane: it must have awakened when you were I don’t know TRYING TO KILL ME!!!

Zane powered down and realised that he had attained the super saiyan level 2… he smiled and said his thanks to the namek and said he had to go to new vegeta to train….
The namek smiled and said that he’d train until he came back and the nexttime would be different…

Zane used his instant transmission and teleported to new vegeta…

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Transformation Super saiyan 2

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