Raven had just finished his training with detroy and decided to have a little walk out side of the city, to train with himself.raven walked up to a tree and rapped his legs around the trunk and started to do press ups. 1 by 1 he did them with out thinking but after three hours he started to fell the burn on his legs but still he keept doing press ups. After another half a hour raven just stopped,
Raven: too easy need more preasure.... AHHH ive got it
raven quickly span around the tree trunk and jumped down and ran back to the town. what he went back for was a huge black block which waighed sixty times ass much as raven, using his power he moved it to the tree were he was doing push up, raven rapped the block to hie arms and shoulders.
Raven: well lets see if this dose the trick
raven jumped back onto the tree and started to do more press
ups but after a minute or two raven could not lift any more
Raven: grrrr COMON RAVEN!
raven was struggling but he managed to so about three more
raven was trying to do more but he could not lift it
Raven: i think ive done enough
raven jumped back down, but with just doing them press ups he could no longer stand up straight
Raven: ahh god this cant be good
raven just tryed to stande but the noice of something behind one of the buildings put him off
Raven: whos there come out!
raven managed to pick him self of off the floor, but as soon as he got up, he fell straight back down
Raven: ahh what am i going to do?
out from nowere a strainger in a black cape jumped out from the trees
?????: hurry raven take this
raven: what?
raven could not lift his arm to get the object what the stranger was about to give him
Raven: errr what? who am you?
?????: Theres no time
the strainger kneled down and picked raven up off of the floor
?????: comon ive goto get you back home
Raven: home? what are you talking about?
?????: theres no time
the strainger flew off carrying raven, raven tryed to see were he was taking him but he was so sapped of energy that he fell to sleep.
----Next morning----
Raven: ehhh
raven sat up to see were he was but all what was aroung him was old creates and tables
Raven: were am I, who were they?
raven got up to walk out of the door to find the person who carryed him off, but still raven could hardly walk.
When he managed to get out of the door he looked around to see were he was.  
Raven got to the door when he saw two men standing opasite each other back to back
Raven: HEY!!
raven was just about to walk up to them when they disaperd
Raven: what?
raven looked around were he was standing to see were they went but there was no one
Raven: mmmm ill try scencing them
raven closed his eyes and started to scence
Raven: mmmmm AHHHH!
raven picked up two anormas power levels
Raven: WHAT that cant be so much power
Raven: but why cant i see them, there probably moving at a high speed
BOOOOM
raven the two men colided fist to fist and started to fight, with each blow the power coming off of them smahsed into raven
Raven: whaoo so powerful
Max: hahaha finaly your awake raven
Raven: what?
one of the men was behind raven
raven terned around to see the man but to his supprise there wer two men both atleased 7.5 feet tall
Raven: whao who am you guys
Felex: hahaha raven its a wonder how you havent reconised us yet
Raven: huuu?
max: Its us
Raven: bbb...Brothers?
Felex: no your chaching on hahahah
Raven: no wate you two died
Max: hummm well im alive am i not
Felex: when our race was wiped out when you was a young boy we stayed and fighted
Raven: yea I know and you both died
Max: not quite, we did not die we was took prisoners by the changlings
Raven: what freiza still alive
Felex: no some sayian killed him I think it was bardoks son
Max: all of the changerlings were wiped out when vageta blow up but there has being rumerd that vegna was capterd and mutated on
Raven: HE SUVIVED TO were is he?
Felex: we dont know but what we do no that he has being made into an wepon
Raven: wepon?
Felex: yes they tortured him and trainged him into the evil ba***rd he has become.
Max: he has being made into a new race of sayian, a evil race
Raven: we must save him
Felex: no its too late now im afrade our brother is no longer alive it is just a person with a twisted mind
Raven: nooo
Raven: but why did you bring me here
max: his gurds were after us, trying to tern us into the demons which they terned vegna was
Raven: ive saw you fight you must be able to take them your the powerfulst people ive saw
Felex: thank you but still we are no mach for his guards
Raven: what are they?
max: they are sayians but mutated on just like vegna
Raven: so why do you want me?
Felex: dont you see your the chosen one
raven: what?
Max: you are the one which will bring order to the sayian race and over throw vegna, or so it told
Raven: were did you lern this?
Felex: It said in the stone tablet which was made from the sacred shaman befor he was killed by vegnas evil servants,
Tho who flows with golden hair shall meet vegna and tho shall be the brother of vegna RAVEN
Raven: what youve got me all wrong I cant take him im way too week you two are the more powerful than me, he was probably wrong.
Felex: the shaman is never wrong
Raven: But why me
Max: because you are the chossen one, we will help you get training but you are the hope of all sayian races
Raven:mmmmm tell me what happend to dad?
Max: he was killed, shoot down but vegna
Raven: grrrrr vegna why
-flash back-
Vegna: hey raven comon letts go
Raven: ok two secs
Vegna: hurry
Raven: ready
Sparow: dont go too far
-flash back ended-
Raven: grrr ok im in when do we start training  
Max: now
Raven: what i cant fight yet im way too tiyerd
Felex: well is that so HAAA!
felex shot a beam into raven to boost his power up
Raven: whaoo i feel strong, i fell stronger than i have ever been
raven got into his guard postion
Raven: comon!
Max: ill go first
max ran straight for raven with a kick ready
raven managed to block the kick but the kick was a decoy, max punched raven which sent him flying
Raven: wow hes strong
Max: hahahah comon!
raven powerd a ki ball around each one of his fists and then ran straight for max
max ran for raven. They got closer and closer until there fists colided, the shock wave which came off of them was enough to smash a mountine 2 miles away.
Raven: grrrr
raven and max was trying to push each other but there powers were mached, the ground around them began to breake and sink.
raven let go of one of his and punched max into the air, and with the two balls of ki in his hands he blasted them at him
Max: very nice but...
with the two balls coming to him he kicked them straight back at raven  

--Last edited by Death lord on 2007-03-30 14:25:08 --

ooc: 1312 add it.

OOC: kk but not finished
Raven: wow! they were my power attacks
raven back flipped out of the way of the two ball of ki comin towards him, they blow a massive hole in the ground.
Max: comon you will have to do more than that to beat me
Raven: grrraaaa
raven started to power up
felex: here we go
ravens power level grew and grew until
Raven: AHH!
raven had just powerd up to the limit were he was a gijji sayian.
Raven: lets try this again
raven flew straight for max and punched him in the face, max flew off to the left but befo he got to far raven grabbed his leg and started to swing him around and then raven let go on max and he flew straight into the ground.
befor he hit the floor max stopped him self by blasting beams into the ground to slow him down
Max: very nice but...
Raven: ow wot now?
max started to power up
Max: grrrRARARARA
maxs musles pumped up and he grew another 0.5 foot
Raven: ow comon!
Max: hahahaha
max telleported from being on the floor to behind raven
raven terned and started to attack max, he was launching punches and kicks but it was doing not much dammage
Raven: so you do this!
raven flew back and powerd up two light blue balls in both hands
Raven: haaaaaa!!!!!
the balls grew three times as big as they were ever befor
Raven: buster....
raven carryed on powering them up
Raven: CANNON!
raven shot the buster cannon at max
Max: HAAAA
max coult the buster cannon and started to control it, max started to fly towards raven with the buster cannon in his hands
Raven: WHAT! no way this shouldent happen HAAAAA!
raven put more power into the buster cannon which made max move back a couple of yards but still he carryed on walking towards raven
Max: hahahaha HAAA
max throw back at raven the buster cannon, the buster cannon hit raven sending him to fly into a mountine which broke and fell on top of raven.
Raven: AHHHHhhhhh....
raven fell to sleep
--FLASH BACK--
vegna: hey look vegna was pointing to some sayians which raven and vegna saw over this hill.
Raven: wow there the elet guards
Vegna: yea and now this is my chance to become one of them
Raven: what are you talking about vegna?
Vegna:I have always dreamed about being a elet guard for king vegeta.
Raven: thats silly
Vegna: its not i will become strong and musley, i will become stronger than all of the elet guard
Raven: hey vegna if you want to do that with your life then thats fine with me
Vegna: comon letts go get a closer look
Raven: thats not a good...
vegna already flew down the hill
Raven: ow why do i always get the cold shoulder
raven followed vegna down the hill
Raven: ok we have got close enough letts go
Vegna: no raven dont be scared, remeber i will never let any one hurt you i am your older brother I have to defend you from any one. now stop being scared
Raven:.......
Vegna: HEY LOOK ITS KING VEGETA!
raven: i dont like were this is going
vegna ran past the guards and ran up to king vegeta
Vegna: SIR! i am here to become one of your elet guards
Vegeta: get this boy away from me!
a guard came befind vegna and grabbed him
Vegna: HEY GET OFF OF ME NOW!
guard: hahaha
Raven: VEGNA!
Vegna: why cant i be one of your guards vegeta!
Vegeta: stut up you will never work for me!
Vegna: ........ grrrrrRAAAAAA!!
vegna started to glow
vegna: if i cant be your guard you wont be able to live
Vegeta: get them both
Raven: NO!
vegna: AHHHHH
when the guards came towards vegna he sent a ball of ki energy around him, blowing up all of the guards around him
Raven: vegna stop it!
vegna: time to die!
vegeta: grrrr
---END OF FLASH BACK---
Raven: ehh?
Raven woke up
Raven: what the VEGNA!
raven started to rub his head
Raven blow out from the mountine and raced towards max.  

--Last edited by Death lord on 2007-03-31 08:39:42 --