Litroy had taken raven and detroy to the dead plains
detroy started to wake up
Detroy: huh? where am i? oh no. he's gonna banish us
Litroy: shut up slug
litroy kicked detroy in the face
Litroy: u'll meet ur pathetic sibling in there
Detroy: k-k-k-kohite?

Raven: ehh? kohite
raven bearly sat up
Raven: hes alive hahahaha, you couldent kill him
Letroy: what!
letroy booted raven in the face making his lip bleed

detroys head started hurting
Detroy: ouh ahhhhhhh woah
Litroy: (whats he doing)
Detroy: huh?(i can read minds?)
Detroyhmm maybe i can channle my powers
Detroy channeled to raven (hey if my brother is alive he may be able to help us)
OOC: if its in brackets then im thinking or im hearing someone think and if i channel to u im speakin to u with my mind so only me n u can hear

Ravenyea that could work but how is that gona stop us from being banished?)
letroy: letts end this
letroy picked raven and detroy up and through us into the portal

Detroy: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH help meeee
the portal felt as if it was ripping the insides of detroy apart
Detroy: woaaaaaaaaaah. huh?
detroy could see his fathers soul shard. it was glowing mysteriously
Detroy: what?
detroy touched the crystal and his power started to rise
detroy: Woahhhhhhhh. whats happening to meeeee

Raven when he got thrown into the portal he did not move he just medatated
Ravenmmmm father brothers I have brought detroy like you asked me to)

his power starting to rise detroy couldnt bear it
soon he looked at him self
Detroy: wha? my skin. its grey
detroys body started to mutate. he was becomming a full powered demon
Detroy: GWAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH

Raven: no not yet
raven started to put presere onto detroy to stop him from transforming
raven started to lose control of detoy
Raven: NOOOO
when they got to yardrat raven had lost control
Raven: detroy control your self!

detroys heart beat had increased rapidly
his whole body was twitching
Detroy: uhh uhhuhu
thoughts of over people started filling his head he couldnt control his new powers
(help me)(where am i?)(hey)(im gonna kill him)(aww how sweet)
Detroy: graaaaaaaahhhhh
he lunged at raven without any more thought

Raven: DETROY!!  dont let you evil take over you!!
raven started to block detroys attack, he refussed to attack detory

un moved by ravens words the blood thirsty detroy started to power up a beam
Detroy: ha ha ha HAHAHA pathetic worm

Raven: detory fight you iner evil, save your anger until your fighting letroy then you can relise it!
Raven: grabbed the beam and started to hold it off

Detroy: huh?
detroy regained some of his humanity, but was still part evil
Detroy: what do you know about anger? i lost my whole family? for what?

Raven: detroy you dont understand ive lost everyone that i have ever held close eveyone my family my freinds, BUT I WILL NOT LOSE YOU DETROY
raven got into his guard stance
Raven: EVEN IF I HAVE TO BEAT THE EVIL OUT OF YOU, I WILL FIGHT YOUR INER EVIL EVEN IF IT KILLS ME
raven started to power up
raven: ahhhhhhh
ravens power level rached its limit, then raven tenered into his giji sayian
Raven: Im sorry detroy but this is the only way i will beat your evil
raven ran at a high speed straight for detroy and swong a punch to his chest

detroy dodged the blow
he retailiated with a swift roundhouse

raven blocked the round house
Raven: detroy!! dont make me do this!!!

detroy kept fighting and quickly jumped back
Detroy: prepare to feel the might of the demon race!
he powered up. his power level rose to 19422
Detroy: ha ha ha your giji saiyan power cant stop this
detroy powered up a light destroyer
Detroy: DIE!
he shot the beam at raven

Raven: mmmm
detroy saw the beam comming at him
Raven: DETROY YOU FOOL
raven power up a ball of ki in his hands and split it into two
Raven: grrraaaa
Raven: buster cannon
raven shot the beam straight for detroys

Detroy: ah ahhahahahahahaha. you fool you cannot defeat my beam
detroys beam clashed with ravens buster cannon
Detroy: cmon this is pathetic put some power into it or i will
***flashback***
Detronous: cmon rogan put some power into it or i will
Rogan: ahhhhh nooooo detronous you gotta stop
detronous puts more power into his beam
rogan: nooooooooooo
detronous obliterates rogan
***end of flashback***
Detroy: huh
detroy regains his humanity, he drains the power from his beam
Detroy: no, not like my father. RAVEN STOP

Raven: im glad you come to your scences but i must destroy the evil within you!
raven carryed on with his buster cannon