Hero used a spacepod to come to this planet. becaus he read about that goku learned his instant transtransmation here. he landed on the planet. steped out of his spacepod and looked around
Hero: weird planet... o whell lets find someone who can help me.
hero flew over the planet awaiting for someone to help him out....

A small group of Yardratians were nearby they were a little scared of Hero as they had never seen him before and would not come closer

Hero: (finally )
Hero: not be scared i do you no harm. i have come from the planet earth. to learn a technick that a guy goku learned from you.
hero put his hands in the air. and slowly landed on the ground

The Yardratians still had no trust for Hero. All of a sudden Ant appeared out of nowhere using the instant transmission, he then looked at the Yardrats

Ant: you wanted help?

the yardrat then pointed at Hero, Ant then turned to look at Hero

Ant: Hi Hero, how you doin?

hero looked suprished that ant come outta nowwhere!
hero: heey ^_^.. those guys are scared of me... bt i want to learn instant transmisson... but i am one of the goodguys!!
hero looked down.. than up to the yadrets... than he went on 1 knee.. and asked: can you guys please help me... i am a good guy what must i do to prove it?

Ant: well the thing is these guys were attacked not so long ago by a group of space bandits, they stole a few things and killed a few Yardrats, therefore they find it hard to trust people these days, you see what I mean?

Hero: hmmmm... yeah i see the point..
hero stood up.. looked at the yadrats.. than looked around him.
Hero: if you tell me where those space bandits are i kill them for you!!

Ant: they don't exactly know were they are camped out,
Ants scouter then began beeping picking up a large group of power levels
Ant: hmmm, it can't be...
Ant then took off his scouter and tossed it to Hero
Ant: Hero catch

hero cathced it.. puted on his eye..
Hero: weird.. its a long time i used a schouter... but let me see... THERE!!
the schouter pointed to a point with a group with alot of power levels..
Hero: ok ant, yadrats i am gonna kill them this is not gonna take while "smiled" than hero flew to the group of powerlevels.
when hero was almost close a ki blast was shot at him. hero was hit.
Hero: who did that?
a space bandit came towards hero with his gun. hero did a powerful kick at him. his helmet crashed!. and the bandit''s skull crashed..
the other bandits saw that the came towards hero.
Hero: well this is gonna be fun. "hero put his hands by his neck and craked his neck" Hero: wait wait now
hero ran towards the group and one for one. punch in the stomach kicked away. jumped over one kicked in his neck. than slide onder someone legs and punched in the guts. than shot alot of ki blasts. 10 where killed. hero had one by his neck. and looked at the others with a evil face.. Hero: still wanna fight? huh?
hero trough the space bandit on the ground than shot a blast at him. he was killed. than the earth shaked. a big bull space bandit steped trought he other space bandits.
A space bandit: hehehe how do you like our bose!?
Hero: big.. but you know what the say.... how bigger the are how harder they fall!!
Bose: man attack!!!
the space bandits run at hero and some shot some ki blasts at him. hero used barrier to deflect the ki blasts to the warriors to ran at him. Hero: not smart you killed your own friends with those ki blasts..
A space bandit: nooo o i gotta get outa here.. HAAAA.
a space bandit try to run away the bose graped him by his neck and ripped him appart!
the other bandits got scared and shot more ki blasts at hero. hero run at the space bandits with speed and avoided the ki blasts. than killed them one for one.
at the end of his run. he stoped for the bose. hero looked up.
Hero: well still want to fight. or maybe to scared. hehe.
Bose: dont even try to scare me i am not afraid of you and your powney powerlevel.
Hero put his scouter on and did a rating at the bull.
Bose Pl:3,999
Hero: who is the one with the puny power level?
Bose: you think thats my max pl? the bose started to Charge. his powerlevel raise!! his clothes and helmet started to get ripped. the bull got more mussels, his horns started to grow.
Bosel:7,888
Hero: (wow his power is 2 doubled.. well thinks this is gonna take a while than...)
Bose: now be ready to get ripped apart.
the bull put his head with he horns fowards. and charged at hero. try to spice him
hero graped his horn and whent spinning without letting him go. then hero whent flying with spinning to a big mounting. and the bull crashed everythime he spinnend againts the mountain, than the mouthian started to coplaps. hero let the bull go, the bull flew into the collauping mountain. the bull was under all the rocks and puwn.
hero: well thats got to hurt.
than outta nothing the bull dashed out the rocks and graped hero by the stomach and trow him on the ground and put his feet on him try to crush his rips. the stamped him more times!!
Hero: whaaat WHAAA WHAAA AAAAAH NOOOO.... AAAAH. AAAAH
the bull woundt stop. you could hear hero sream and his bone crack.
Bose: haahahahah that what you did was a nasty trick.. so i think i will redo the favor. he he
hero: well you maybe think you can crush me but you CANT!!
hero craps the foot of the bull and try to get it of his rips. he pulled as hard as he can. the foot moved maybe 2 inch. than hero Press as hard as he can with charg. he trow the bull aways the bull took a step back. hero pulled hiself up with a flickflak than dashed at the bull. the try to punch him. just for the punch hero teleported behind the bull giving him a ellebow. in the back. teleported and did a kamehameha in his face than the bull''s head went back. than hero fel on the ground doing a sweep kick. causing the bull to fall. and than jumped into the sky than fucused all his power in his fist than flew down with his fist down. the bull looked up and saw hero coming he tried to stand up. but he had no power because of the kamehameha. hero collide with the bull causing a big crater where the bull lied. hero was with his fist in the stomach of the bull the bull spit blood and than hero put his hand out of the stomach and than.Hero: sorry but this is only way i can learn a technick and you guys killed inacinst people. you will PAY. SUPER FINISH BUSTER. and hero shot his super finish buster at the bull face causing the bull to die..
than hero put his schouter on and found ant again. flew towards him and the yadrats.
Hero: haaa phew i did it there dead. do you trust me know..
hero was exausted. and sit on the ground.

ooc: add 923 to your pl

Ant: well done the Yardrats are very grateful for your help

Hero: well thanks it was my pleasure.. but i came for the instant transmission.. could you guys now explain how it works?

Ant then looked at one of the Yardratians, the Yardrat then nodded

Ant: It seems I'll be teaching it to you

hero stood up of exaightment.
Hero: COOL!!.... "hero looked than to the yadrat" Thank you...

Ant then folded his arms,
Ant: riiight, well, the Shunkan Ido or the Instant transmission is an ability where your body can travel through alternate dimensions very quickly, you basically become a shred of light, you move that quick to your designated area. First you must be able to sense your targets power level, then you must travel to your target through the alternative dimension

The Yardrat then looked at Hero and probed the explanation of how to do the technique into his mind

Hero was listening and didnt even understand everything of it...”(man what is he talking about i dont understand a word he is saying...)
Yadrat thinking: hero you can hear me right!
Hero thinking: who is this!!
Yadrat tinking: i am de yadrat and i can read minds and talk via minds.. you need to listen now!
Hero thinking: ok... weird but cool!! You need to tech me that 2 sometime!!
Yadrat thinking: noo there is no time for that.. Listen NOW!!
Hero thinking: yeezz.....ok i am listen
Yadrat: first you need to focus on a powerlevel of someone not to close. With instant transmission you dont teleport you go to a big tunnel and that is calling a deminsion. Understand?
Hero thinking: yeah weird technick but i understand!
Yadrat thiking: good good.. well after you focused you must open a portel in your mind!! So you must think that you go into a another deminsion.. get it so far?
Hero thinking: interesting!!.......... OO yeah got it!!
Yadrat thinking: ok after you did that you actully must walk into that tunnel. Into that tunnel the time of the real world stands almost still. But you dont you just move like you suppose to do. Than in your mind you must run to the exit of the tunnel. When your there than you must let your body there 2 Because if you not.. your mind is away from you body and your body is dead. So be carefull! Now are you on your own! Goodluck
Hero thinking: wow ok must do it in one time good. Thank you very much. Bye!

Hero: ok i understand it know only now i must try to... And do it in one time good or else....
hero closed his eyes. and tied to look for a powerlevel... he found none. because he was on another planet.. than he found one.. it was a alive space bandit.. it was a weak powerlevel he tried to focus on it.. it was hard it was far and weak... hero had it in his mind 100% only now he must try to make a deminsion. he put 2 fingers against his head. he let his whole under the powerlevel sense hero Fronsed and tried harder and harder to focus. he wanted to teleport than a dimension came open for him he opend his eyes and when in it he saw the demension.. Hero: ok i did it... ok how can i go out of this...
then he saw the powerlevel and the end of the deminsion tunnel. he ran as hard he could.
the body of hero started to fag he went to teleport.
hero ran out of the tunnel. at that same time hero' body disapeard.. he opened his eyes and he saw the space bandit.
the space bandit was schokend that hero came outta nowwhere!
Space bandit: nooooo not you again.
Hero: huh.. YES I DID IT! "hero jumped of joy." because i am so happy i let you live!! but saw to your other friends. If you guys attack this planet again i will be back!! and with Friends much stronger than me!!!
than hero focused on ant his powerlevel.. this time he did it much faster. his body started to fag than he dissapeard.
and came for ant his face.
Hero: ANT I DID IT  JOEHOE!!!
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--Last edited by littlegohan on 2007-06-30 23:17:10 --

ooc: yeah dude you need 400

OCC: can i edit than?

ooc: go for it

OCC: new edit!!

Ant: wow thats awesome man, you finally did it

ooc: move accepted