Zane landed on the planet known as yardrat...

Zane:so this is where Goku learnt his I.T technique, i'm sensing something strange??, what the...

then a few outlines appear...

Zane:who's there? hello...

then the shadows form and there's a few alien like creatures standing there...

Zane:hey im Zane... im a saiyan and i mean you no harm...

Yardrats walk forward hesitantly...

Zane:I...I wish to train with you...

Yardrat: you want to train with us... why is it you wish to do this... we only train special people who have no evil within them.. how can we tell that you are not like many saiyans we have heard of?

Zane:I... i cannot prove this to you i guess... you will just have to trust me and trust that i am inoocent and pure..and i wish to train with you so i can master the technique that you taught to the ledgendary Goku... the instant transmission...

yardrat: you know goku?... he was our most willing and pure student he trained hard and never gave up... if you say that you are of the same race as goku then i guess we can trust you...

Zane: you will not regret this! and us saiyans never give up! if it seems we are losing, dieng! we will never give up..

yardrat:follow me young saiyan...

zane followed the yardrats into a small room in there village, they told him to sit there and that they would be back...

Zane... ok then..

Zane sat down and waited for them.3 hours passed and they still hadn't come back...

Zane: where in kami's name are they??

then the door opened and a yardrat appeared...

Zane: you're back....

Yardrat: sorry for the wait but we had to see if you were patient enough to undergo the training and mental stability of our training, it's is very mentally challenging...

Zane looked shocked but accepted this...

Zane: of course you must do this... you don't want quitters to waste your time...

Yardrat:follow me young saiyan...

Zane got up eargerly and followed the yardrat outside, there was a square platform with 1 yardrat standing in the middle...

Zane was told to step up on the platform....

Yardrat: fight him!...

Zane: wha.. what..

then the fighter yardrat dissapeared and zane took his battle stance!.. then zane felt his energy behin him..

Zane:got you!..

then the fighter yardrat was behind him again and delivered a punch to the back of Zane's head knocking him over...

Zane:ahhhh how can i hit him!!

Yardrat:slow down you mind, clear thinking and see what no other can...

Zane then closed his eyes and cleared his mind...

Zane: i see...

Zane spun around and deliver a spin kick to what seemed like thin air and then teleported to the other side of the platform and caught the yardrat....

Yardrat: well done you have achieved the status you needed and learnt the instant transmission tech...

Zane: thankyou wise one... i must go and practice some more thank you..

Zane got into his ship and waved goodbye...

505 words

instant transmission tech?  

--Last edited by vegetrunks on 2007-07-09 16:53:05 --

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