After a rough day of training with Syran, Duskagun realized how much he had been slacking off since his ban from the Trinity realm and since the otherworld had such an inviting sense it was the best place to train.
-ahhh what a day well lets go!
Dusk swings his leg down and smashes the floor with his hove into the ground sending debris everywhere.
-HUUUYAAAAA!
Dusk send a barrage of small ki, that shoots every peace of debris in the air.
(few rock fall to the ground)
-How is this possible I use to be able to hit all the pieces!!
-I may have became stronger but I have lost my skill…
-how would I gain battle skill?
-Arrrg! …I need a mentor…
As he lifted into the air he saw two otherworld workers.
Dunker-Hey you! What are you and how are you flying!?
Bonker-Yea come down here you dead fool soo we can punish you for your sins!
-hmmmm they seem to think I am one of there “customers”…Sweat not workers of the glorious! I am simply visiting this place the feel is excuisite!
Bonker-Im  glade you like it cuz youll be staying here!!!
-wha…
Dunker-are you sure he looks tough?
Bonker-it’s the rules you Dunk-head enyone who falls from the snake trail has to spend eternity in hell!!!
Dunker-well I guess… …but
Bonker no BUTS!!!! HEY YOU UP THERE  COME DOWN HERE YOU BELONG TO US NOW!!!
-(in thought)wow never though they would be soo stupid… Well im gonna use them to get the perfect mentor
-Hold on im comin down!
Dusk slowly lowers down to the ground
Bonker-See Dunker that waz easy now we have one more for the collection!
-(in thought) well im preatty weak ill hafta be strategic!
-that’s rite be a good sinner wait sto(gluk!)
Dusk swings his left arm into Bonkers gut and holds him there with a stong grasp onto his stomach.
Bonker-WhAt ARE yOu Do(gluk)!
-Don’t talk it will only hurt more… Now Back to business where could I find a good trainer?
Dunker-stay away from him you mongrel!
Dunker swings his club and hits and hits Dusk in the head
Dusk drops Bonker on the floor
-Ow! That surprisingly hurts I must still be weak from last battle wow even after all the resting I did im still weak! Even my immunity couldn’t keep up with the damage no wonder the terrain of that battle waz in such a bad shape that battle waz fierce!
-ok I got into this now I hafta finish it!
Bonker-see he isn’t that strong I barly hit him and hes already wonded
Dunker-you seemed in a lot of  pain when he had a grip on you…
Bonker-shut up!!! Ok maybe he is strong but he has no resistance whatsoever. Lest get him!
They dashed towards him at a slow and bulky paste
-pathetic!
Dusk shoots though them and hits them both on the head
-you ready to tell what I want to know?
Bonker gets up and runs towards dusk dizzly. Dusk grabs his arm and throws him to the ground. At that moment Dunker smashes with all his might on Dusks head
*THUD*
Dusk smashes to the ground were his nose starts to bleed
-What a Aries bleeding on demonic soil? What an insult!!!!
Dunker-isn’t this the part of the manga were the bad guy starts to bleed and beats the shit out of his enemy?
Bonker-your stupid why would anyone make a manga out of you? It would be about me!
-You little pricks!!! Ill murder you’re and your families!!!!
Dusks power rose over the rooftop shaking everything around him
Both-holy crap!
Dusk spread across behind them swung his arm and ripped Bonkers head clean off
Dunker-Waaaaaa!
-you wants some too fat boy?
-METEOR CRUSH!!!!
Dusk then smashed his fist straight into Dunkers body splitting him to millions of little bits and pieces…
Dusk then calmed down do a rested state when he heard a voice.
???-Bravo!! That was great you impress me Mr. Horns
-Who are you and what do you want with me?
By this time dusk weakness had consumed him he could only see a blur
???-I will be the mentor you where searching for…
All dusk could see now was the stranger’s fuzzy silhouette…
He was tall, two tall spikes on the top of his head and giant spiked thing that seemed to replace his arms.  

--Last edited by Slaaneshyreaper on 2007-07-14 02:32:21 --

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