Dusk awoke in the otherworld sin a different aria than before completely rejuvenated his body had done its part.
-Wear am I? Holy crap I feel light!
???-That is you new power
-What? Who are you and were are you?
???-Ah! The dizzy questioning after a good night sleep so good of you to have woken up! No need to ask me who I am I am your mentor!
-Mentor? Wait that voice you are the one that was with me before I passed out! Are you the one that made me this strong?
???-HAHAHA! I wish I could just boost some ones strength like that! But your body get stronger as it takes damage and you also need to improve your movement so I have the perfect training for you!
A series of ki beams plunge to Dusks direction.
-Holy shit!
Dusk then dodges the beams at last second
???-now if you dodge your Movement improves and if you don’t…
Dusk fells something behind him but before he could turn around he was facing the floor
???-…You get stronger.
Dusk gets up and wipes the dirt of his nose
-Thanks ive always enjoyed eating dirt!!
???-Ahhh long I have awaited for someone like you!
Dusk then jumps out of the way of five more ki blasts
-were are you smart ass!
I will only show myself once you prove yourself to me
-Wait what happened to those guards??
???-You don’t remember? You killed them!
-Me KILL somebody?
Dusk looks at his hands witch still have the remains of blood
-They must of provoked me!
???-You wouldn’t believe how brutal it was. It certainly was fun watching an Aries Trinitron rip two of the most annoying guards in all the otherworld!
-What!? How do you know about Trinitrons? they are a sacred race than even the smartest mortal wouldn’t know about us!!!
Then Dusk felt is whole body tighten, and tighten, and tighten pain filled his body
???-Calm Down! If you are distracted you cant dodge my attacks then what use is my training?
-H-how… how do you K-know about… …about us?
???-I have been dead for a long time boy,  ive watched as I became less known and less cared for others with superior strength piled on top of me I even saw Freizza a man with such compation for his dream go though the same thing at the time I was laughing at his lack of ambition but know I realize we are forgotten and there’s no way of ever returning back even if we would want to be nice… …this really is hell…
???-But Buu! On the other hand he’s the only one that wouldn’t be bothered by this place he gets to live again! Just because Goku likes him what a fool! Anyway I have lots of time on my hands so I know  of your race and of it secretly fighting deamons that threaten the flow of the universe.
-Wo…Wow… ..I never saw… never saw it that way… …You have hard lives…
???-hmf nobody ever does… Well you resisted that for long enough
The mysterious trainer then released Dusk
-Thanks to you I will be a more open person you have opened my eyes…
Dusk has went thru tough training both in body and mind and looks at the horizon of hell knowing that this training would be a useful one  

--Last edited by Slaaneshyreaper on 2007-07-14 05:25:41 --

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