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 Trimss
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 Saiyan
  Posted 24/06/2007 10:20:37 AM
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Base of Muten roshi by Fullpower .  

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 SSj5Bob
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 SSj5Bob
  Posted 24/06/2007 02:14:05 PM
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He needs eyelids

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 jobboe
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 jobboe
  Posted 24/06/2007 02:53:39 PM
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awsome

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 Trimss
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  Posted 24/06/2007 05:42:50 PM
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I Finish him^^ what do you thinkin ?
I like him ^^

 SSj5Bob
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 SSj5Bob
  Posted 24/06/2007 06:06:48 PM
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Quote :

SSj5Bob wrote : He needs eyelids



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 Trimss
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  Posted 24/06/2007 06:21:41 PM
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Any exemple please ?

 The Huggable Tay Bear
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 The Huggable Tay Bear
  Posted 24/06/2007 07:25:54 PM
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White eyebrows are a bad thing in LSW spriting...

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 SSj5Bob
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 SSj5Bob
  Posted 24/06/2007 07:49:10 PM
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Trimss wrote : Any exemple please ?




The black line that goes around the top and sides of eyes in LSW sprites. Look at any of the original sprites... in fact almost any LSW sprite and you should see what I mean.

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 Germini
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 Germini
  Posted 25/06/2007 06:13:36 PM
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His eyes looks weird

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 Evil Gohan
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 Evil Gohan
  Posted 25/06/2007 10:00:00 PM
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Yeah, do some work on teh eyes...
5/10

|Name: Evil Gohan|Age: 22|Race: Saiyan|PL: 2765|Attacks: Evil Kamehameha,Blast wave,Blast Wave Volley|Transformations:n/a

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 JB~LG
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 JB~LG
  Posted 27/06/2007 06:11:47 PM
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i think he looks very weird his hair isnt on the right place and he need eyelids.. 3/10 sorry

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Tnx kage for ava
 jobboe
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 jobboe
  Posted 28/06/2007 03:44:08 AM
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he needs a bit of doing up

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 Flame
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 Flame
  Posted 28/06/2007 06:37:19 AM
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I just think the overall sprites need fixing..sorry. 4/10.

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 Vaati
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 Saiyan
  Posted 05/07/2007 09:31:15 AM
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Ughh I;m sorry but  the hair(wig) is atrocious, it's pillow shaded, dosen't actually look like a wig, and the "hairlines" are out of place. The ear on the Kamehameha needs to look less like an elf's, round them off a bit. The head could use smoother shading, maybe even a mid tone. And like SSJ5Bob said:

"Needs eyelids"  

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 jobboe
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 jobboe
  Posted 11/07/2007 10:39:26 AM
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ye the eyes look weird

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 toom
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 Saiyan
 toom
  Posted 11/07/2007 01:37:35 PM
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5.2/10

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 JunjotoBeam
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 JunjotoBeam
  Posted 13/07/2007 07:36:40 PM
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SWEET 8.5/10

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 Blues Light
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 Blues Light
  Posted 13/07/2007 09:17:01 PM
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Everyone's alredy said eyelids, and the outline on the Lightning Surprise Attack should not be black. Attack's don't have black outlines normally.

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 Genesis Of Dragon
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 Ultra Super Saiyan
 Genesis Of Dragon
  Posted 13/07/2007 11:26:04 PM
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It's just not very good. Sorry, but I can't see any other ways to improve.

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 Dack
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 Dack
  Posted 09/08/2007 00:24:50 AM
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colored eyebrows makes Dack a sad panda

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